Transmigrated with a Department Store: The Farmer Girl Becomes a Billionaire

It's good-looking, and I can see that the author is a very optimistic, lively and cheerful little girl. The author, including my baby, will reply to all my paragraph book reviews. The following is my objective book review ~ What is worthy of recognition is that the plot is not procrastinating and makes you feel good when reading it. The author can convey his lively and cheerful mentality to everyone through a novel. As other book reviews said, it is a pretty standard refreshing article. But I still have some suggestions from my perspective: 1. The characters in the book don't have distinct personalities. Everyone seems to have the same personality, laughing and joking. Even though the book mentions that the male protagonist is a cold and cold prince, there is no very clear character description in the back. From what I have seen so far, I only think that Xuan Yi and the supporting actress whose name I forgot (the one who was almost married to the prince by the Queen Mother) have distinct personalities. 2. It feels like I am acting in a sitcom, with very few scenes. Basically, it is the space of the store - Mingyue Building, and occasionally I write some scenes on the street. So far, I feel that the author has limited the plot. I just add new stories every day, deliver food to relatives and friends, and occasionally write some branch plots with very little pen and ink... I don't know if the later scenes will open up, or maybe I commented too early. 3. Baby, I think some authors' os can really be written at the end of the article, and there are some dramas in the photos in the article. Although it's quite fun, from a visual point of view, the author's professionalism will be deducted somewhat. Maybe I read more articles and am more selective. Even when I read cool articles, I hope to see cool articles with excellent writing skills. What I feel so far is that it is the amateur writing and drawing of a very thoughtful little girl (although Baobao may not be a full-time author). Of course, most readers can't help but think while reading: If the author's writing was excellent, this book would be more popular. A very objective reader evaluation, I hope it can help the author to some extent.

I accidentally saw this article, and the comment said that the content is exaggerated, so I will follow it. Usually I finish reading it, because following the article makes people anxious [laughing and crying], I hope there will not be too few updates, and the article will not let me down too much. The more exaggerated it is, the more I like to read it, (personal favorite)

Very well written! ! ! It is a brainless and cool article. I said at the beginning that modern things will be used directly, so I don't think there is any need to pursue logic or anything. I am afraid of being discovered if I write too much. And then the little bit of business development seems very tiring (from my personal point of view, the writing is very good!) But this book seems very relaxed, happy and fun! The emotional line is also very fast. I like this kind of direct expression of my feelings without delay. When will it be finished? I don't dare to read it now. I will save it and finish it slowly. I hope to write more! ! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's very interesting. The heroine starts a career, opens a shop, and then makes some delicious things (●°u°●) "By the way, I occasionally fall in love, but there is a setting that I still don't like (no harm), which is that space can bind people. I think space is the heroine's trump card. Even if she trusts her again, I think it is okay to come in. But, the premise is that it can only be brought in by the heroine, that is, she must rely on the heroine to get in. Otherwise, there will always be an uneasy feeling. Otherwise, when the sister and the hero become casual, I think it will not be the heroine's trump card. . . It's still quite funny. Alas, I can accept it after watching it too much! ! ! Come on, the author, I think this subject matter is quite good! ! ! If you can add pictures, that would be great. After all, sometimes I really can't imagine it. Oh my god, I don't know why. I've read more than 300 chapters and suddenly I feel a little tired.

It's a good read. It's a cool article. You don't need to use your brain. Don't try to insert logic. When you read the article, you just need to relax and have fun. If you love food, please read more without thinking.

It's really good-looking, I felt very happy watching it. I just like to see people take things out openly without hiding them. It's really cool! ! ! ! Everyone go and see it! ! ! ! ! Highly recommended!

The four stars are because I can watch it. It is a bit exaggerated, but if you watch it without thinking, it will be much more comfortable. Personally, it is better than the kind of "more than enough" (in my case, this means: the writing is OK but there are many uncomfortable surprises/plot and so on, the writing is novice + embarrassing), at least the writing is a bit novice, but it is exaggerated enough, so it is enjoyable. I don't know if you understand me. . Except for the emotional line, which I don't like very much, and some of the inner monologues, which can be awkward and dramatic, the food is well written... I'll get hungry while reading it () It feels like the heroine is doing charity work hhhh (referring to employee wages) and the focus seems to be on food. Anyway, I don't want to go into the details. I recommend it.

As a mindless novel, I found it really enjoyable. Some of the plots were very funny, the group portraits were also interesting, and the length was long enough. It was about as good as it gets for me. However, there are still some shortcomings. I don't even know about the ambiguous stage between the male and female protagonists before they got together. How did the male protagonist fall in love with the female protagonist? It seems that he suddenly started to care. I originally thought that the male protagonist thought that the female protagonist was valuable, but later it was not true. If it was just based on appearance, it was actually very strange. The living conditions of the female protagonist were not good at the beginning, and it took only a few months to raise her. There will be no sudden change in appearance, and other beauties who approach the male protagonist will also shoot them away, so it is not like love at first sight. The male protagonist's mental journey is a bit unclear, and then the male protagonist delivers meals to his subordinates. Although the upper and lower classes in this article are not very strict, this paragraph is too anti-Tiangang. , The last thing is that the author's inner OS is too much. I always listen to books, and suddenly I heard a few words about the author's OS. I was very surprised [face covering] I know that the author wants to interact with readers, but can I not write so much in the text? I can just leave it as it is. But overall it's still very beautiful, I give it five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Just read it. I didn't say a word after reading it. I was looking forward to a web series. It's amazing. There is no other novel that is as greasy and crooked. The male and female protagonists are also very sweet. Close your eyes and watch! ! ! I love my family so much that I stay up late chasing after them

The first million-word novel that I read from beginning to end. This book is warm, relaxing, and has no intrigue. It is suitable for people who like plain and relaxing genres. This novel really fattened up in my bookshelf little by little. It took me a few days to finish it in one sitting. There are many delicious foods in it. If you like food articles, you can read it with confidence. There is no abuse in the whole book. Five-star praise, highly recommended! ! ! ! Hope to see the author's next novel soon