Zhao Yun, the Strongest Support in the Three Kingdoms

From my personal point of view, it's okay to include civil servants and generals, but the protagonist has a halo, and it wouldn't be a good story without cheating. In ancient times, people had charisma, and everyone wanted to be successful, so it was understandable to conquer others. Other plots were actually acceptable as long as they were arranged reasonably and had the aura of the protagonist. The only thing that is unacceptable is to abandon the aristocratic family and create a world without the exploitation of the aristocratic family. This is too unrealistic and will never come true no matter how hard it is. In ancient times, this was simply impossible to do, and even backfired. However, it is feasible to limit the power of the aristocracy, reduce exploitation, and provide more policies to benefit the people. This is just my personal opinion. It's not easy for the author to create. Please do your best @Butt

1. The positioning should be a cool article. You can grasp the existing cool points, accept the beauties that should be included, and do not let go of famous generals and ministers. 2. When creating the protagonist, I obviously want to have a growth process. Personally, I feel that the growth is a bit too fast. Even if there is pressure, growth does not mean that you have to fight for hegemony and then change your identity to become a superior. The change of temperament can be written, but the identity adapts too quickly. Also, when the protagonist speaks, please use less calm words. Sometimes there are big mood swings in the previous paragraph, and then they are calm the next second. The character is built around loyalty and great love. It seems that there is nothing too OOC so far. 3. In communication with the people around them, men surrender too quickly, and women like it too quickly. There is a lack of a process. If brothers need to be used to create passionate scenes later, or the heroine creates tragic scenes, there will be a lack of sense of substitution. Especially for female characters, a large number of people come here for beautiful women, so I personally feel that the description of emotional scenes needs to be more detailed. As for the male characters, as long as they don't give in, it shouldn't be a big problem. 4. A suggestion is that you can bring some notes when certain characters appear. It doesn't need to be too complicated. The camp and position should be enough for future generations to evaluate. Because some readers are not familiar with the history of the Three Kingdoms, these notes can give some hints and also increase the sense of satisfaction of knowing the famous minister and general whose house he robbed. To sum up, three stars are the base and 4 stars are the encouragement.

At present, it seems to be more realistic and well-written. Although there are some minor flaws, as a newbie, I think the author's writing is very good. I hope that he can make slight improvements in the subsequent plots. I hope the author can listen to the readers' opinions if they think they are good. I will keep reading, keep going.

The unforgettable Three Kingdoms, I hope I can finish it normally, don't stop updating, come on

It's a rare book that has a correct outlook on life, an online IQ, and a comfortable reading! Please keep up the good work!

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

How can I put it, overall it's pretty good, but the main character's words and actions make people feel very petty.

When you go to the sea, you must save the Dudu bird. Well, you must update it quickly.

Okay, but I don't know if I can accept Mrs. Zhen. It doesn't work well in the back

Good! The first five-star is for you!