Shocking! The Invincible Big Shot Becomes Everyone's Beloved Junior Sister

The previous description feels like the structure is not open. I feel that the imaginable pictures and characters are not very three-dimensional and a bit blurry. Then the plot seems a bit [small] [exploration] [exploration] (just use the word "small" to describe it, it is the picture feeling shown to me when I saw the story). I think it is necessary to add many small details. For example, the male 1 found out that he could hear the voice of the heroine. He could be unfamiliar and disbelieving at first, and then become suspicious and familiar. The character changes process is a bit too fast. It's a bit unreasonable. The characters in the first few pictures easily believe and accept things that are not beyond common sense. They feel very abrupt and the characters feel very vague. The characters are not very vivid. Please write them more carefully. I really like the story settings and the overall plot. I really like [Send Heart] [Send Heart]. I hope there will be more detailed descriptions and rationality of character changes.

It's great. Baby Chi Yu is super cute. I also like the plot. It's not boring at all. I really can't read novels that feel frustrating. This one is just right. It's not too ostentatious and not too frustrating. In short, it's very interesting to watch. Come on! [Blowing kiss]

I personally like this book quite a bit*^_^* The style is humorous and witty. Sometimes when I see a fragment, I feel empathetic and I laugh unconsciously. Anyway, I am very happy after reading it^_^ (I did not read this book with my brain because I automatically ignored the logic aspect, but it does not prevent me from liking this book) ★The author of this book seems to be a novice, so be tolerant of newbies. I love you and hope you will update more! New to the pit 😘😘 ★★★What attracts me to this book is the plot. The general outline may make readers feel a bit similar, but the author has eclectically walked a new path on this track and opened up a new door. It made my eyes light up and I felt that the elements of multiple fantasy novels were combined in a new way. [Hope: I hope the author can work hard and update, but don't tire yourself out, don't interrupt the update, oh my god. Readers: I hope everyone can find the shining points of this book and be more tolerant of its shortcomings! Finally, I hope that everyone will be successful, safe and healthy, and become rich and beautiful! I like (✪▽✪) this book [love]

This book is very good, no censorship, no ambiguity, full of sect love and friendship. The heroine is kind, but not the Virgin. Even if she is hurt and betrayed, she still retains a trace of hope for humanity. The conditions for ascension written by the author are also refreshing. Because you are loved, you will love; because you are hated, you will hate. The end of the novel, Xiao Hei, left me a bit confused. Above the law of heaven, there is order and cause and effect. Even the law of heaven cannot change a person's destiny without authorization. This is the price he should pay, and it is also his willingness. The road is ruthless, but people are affectionate.

The description is really good, but there are still a lot of regrets in the final ending, and why do we have to go to Earth? Is there anything good about this place? I really can't let go of the original people [almost crying][crying]

Very beautiful, very beautiful But it also makes me very regretful. Wuwuwuwu. I cried through the next few chapters... I really can't bear the separation Mo Tian couldn't express his feelings until the end... Ning Zhen didn't have time to send the doll away, and he also suffered a lot of injuries on his hands from sewing the doll... I don't know how to describe my current mood like this, it's very sad The same goes for Xiao Hei, who still deceived Xiao Bai in the end. I promised that I would never lie to her again. Well, not even God can resist death I really didn't expect that the separation would come so suddenly. I didn't even react I thought they would reunite, but I was wrong really sad I was very jealous of Mo Tian and Xiao Bai at that time. In the end, it didn't go as I wished. Heng Yanyan may not be a good person, but she must be a good daughter Finally, I wish everyone in the book a happy day Goodbye

There is no evil person in this book who is evil to the core. Even Huan Yanyan did not kill anyone in the village at the last moment. The character of the heroine is very well developed. She is strong but not arrogant. Each character has a distinct personality, and the master. The relationship in the novel is the most enviable. The pace of the whole novel is still very fast, and there is nothing heart-wrenching.

The interaction between Chi Yu and her senior brothers and sisters, including Shizun, is very loving and interesting [cool]. Sometimes Xiaobai is cute and sometimes really handsome. But I still feel sorry for Xiaobai's experience [almost crying]. Fortunately, she has a close friend who truly loves and protects her. The chapters towards the end of Shimen, especially the parting chapter, really touch the heartstrings. I am very touching. I want to cry [almost crying]. They really love Xiaobai well. Xiaobai is also trying to love while being loved [loving]

Great writing. Baby Chi Yu is really super cute. He is a baby who cannot be defeated no matter how many difficulties there are, but will shed tears when encountering the kindness of others. He is a determined, tenacious and beautiful baby, and getting along with other people is also super interesting. I look forward to the following content and hope Chi Bao gets what he wants.

Chi Yu, was originally the big boss sister who was going to ascend, but due to some reasons, she could not ascend. Later, the 33 system baby came and asked her to do the vicious female supporting role. After completing the task, she ascended. In the process, Yu Yuan, the ancestor, met people who were kind to her one after another. She experienced being loved, being hated, loving, and hating. These four emotions have real meaning.，，，，，，，，， In the end, she was going to ascend, and she couldn't let them go, and they couldn't let her go, but they knew that they didn't want to restrain her, and they should ask her to follow her heart and move forward, and finally fight to say goodbye to each other. In the end, Chi Yu also knew everything, but she was also deceived by a little white lie [in order to make her ascend with peace of mind] At this point - Chi Yu, ancestor Yu Yuan ascended and left this world. "Full text complete" I hope everyone will read this novel, it's very interesting