Growing Old with Professor Snape

Shamelessly give yourself a five stars. Unknowingly, I said a bit too much, so the simplified version is: I love Mia and Severus, and this fanfic is about making Severus happy throughout his life. Opinions on the four colleges: In my opinion, the four colleges are the same, and each college has its own advantages and characteristics. The four founders came together like-minded to start Hogwarts. Later, Salazar left due to disagreements over his ideas, but it did not go so far as to antagonize others. The song sung by the Sorting Hat at the beginning of the fifth grade reflects on whether it has affected student unity by dividing students into four houses. Therefore, in my opinion, Slytherin and Gryffindor have never been opposites. Slytherin is not all bad people, Gryffindor is not all good people, Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff are not necessarily selective and neutral. These two schools are also excellent. About the heroine: My heroine, she is just an ordinary little girl, without a prominent family background or a genius mind, but to Severus, she is a warm little sun. Because Si Jiao's life is too dark, I hope there will be a ray of warm sunshine to illuminate him. About being friends with Lily: I'm sorry, I can't describe anything bad about Lily, because Lily is a very beautiful girl in the original book. Since they are two very good girls, why can't they be friends? Mia had no friends before she was six years old. After she was six years old, she met Severus and became friends. But after all, Severus was a boy. At this time, Lily, who was also a girl, a wizard, good-looking, and had a good personality, appeared. Why couldn't Mia like Lily and be friends with her? Regarding the plot: It may be very bland, with no twists and turns, and impossible to abuse. Because I think living an ordinary life is the most rare thing. Friends, lovers, and children are all around you. The biggest worry every day is what to eat for lunch. In my opinion, this is the happiest thing. The Sijiao in the original work is already hard enough, and I don't want him to endure hardship in my fanfic. So I write the fanfic just to make him happy and to see him endure hardship, so just read the original work.

The overall plot is good, the story of Sif and the heroine's childhood sweetheart falling in love and living smoothly. It is suggested that the author should use fewer brackets to mark his or her thoughts, and they can be written in what the author has to say later. From my personal experience, too many brackets can be a bit confusing.

In my opinion, this score is not directly proportional to the quality of the article. The score is low. The original heroine, CP Sijiao, childhood sweethearts grew up together without being reborn. The whole story is sweet and heart-warming. The heroine's separation to the lion's courtyard may have put many readers away, but I personally feel that there is nothing wrong with it later, and it is not like some paragraphs saying that she will lick Lily. The heroine is very tough, just like the four lions from the marriage era! The heroine is also very powerful. She and Sif fought with four lions (to the point of throwing curses at each other), but the relationship later eased and the relationship was not that bad. The heroine and Sifu went abroad to get married right after graduation (to avoid the limelight) Because the heroine has a good relationship with Lily, she and Sev became Harry's godfather and godmother (Sirius is also a godfather). With their protection, children are no longer needed to fight Voldemort, and adults contribute throughout the book. Everyone is fine [Thinking]

It's a good read. After reading this book, I really feel more and more sorry for the original Snape. The parents of the child's life really have to bear a lot of responsibility. I am very happy that he has also met a mother like Aunt Shafiq, who is willing to guide him and educate him. It's great to have my sister's company.

I've finished reading it. It's very well written. I've always wanted to read an HP like this. Most of the stories about the parent generation include all members, but in this case, you can usually only see the parent generation, the story cannot be continued, and the child generation is basically nothing to watch. Therefore, the writing is very good. From the parent generation to the offspring generation, the plot is not missing, and it is neither too perfect nor too ordinary.

The heroine and Silver were childhood sweethearts. Silver had a wonderful (?) Childhood and did not join the Death Eaters. Although Lily and James are still dead, and although Harry has been sent to his aunt's house, he has a godfather and a godmother. He is no longer dependent on others like in the original book. He is as naughty and mischievous as James. A bland ending, but I quite liked it, everyone was pretty good.

I like this style very much. Mia is very cute. Her mother is really good at educating children. Sifu here will be jealous of Lily. Hahaha, he and Mia are childhood sweethearts. They are very close to each other. He is becoming more and more curious about the truth. Who is Mia's father? It's so good to watch. Please come to more.

Well, it's a sweet little article, not bad... To be honest, the heroine's identity is really logical! According to the setting of the original work, it is so perfectly integrated into the existence of the heroine, and it feels very self-consistent! The main plot is roughly consistent with the growth path of Si Si. Just because of the existence of the heroine, Si Si's life has undergone earth-shaking changes. The departure of his scumbag father and the second spring of his love-minded mother have at least freed him from the torture of his original family. Even if his mother still doesn't love him that much, he has received enough care and care from the heroine, filling the gap in family ties. The heroine is even more like a cookie, pulling Si Si forward happily~ The school days are also noisy and exciting, and the predators are still feuding, but this time with the help of the heroine, the two sides can even gain the upper hand in the fight! And during the most stressful period, they can also travel around the world to provide magic potion backup to the Order of the Phoenix... The biggest setback in the novel is the departure of Lily and James. Harry suffered for three years, and the stupid dog still spent twelve years in prison... But the dog asked for it, so it's not important~ The plot gradually changes later. After rescuing Regulus from an accident, the heroine and Sisi are doing their jobs as professors. , While raising children, he also cooperated with Dumbledore to find and destroy Horcruxes... Even after Harry entered school, he still fulfilled the heroine's wishes and only had to be a child who grew up healthy and happy. The work of resisting Voldemort head-on was basically done by them... They even did it all the way to the finale... The main plot should be considered a bland and warm daily flow. The most lively and enthusiastic one is the heroine. The other characters, including Si Jiao, are a little bit thin and don't feel like they stand up... The plot arrangement is okay, and the writing is not a novice. It can be read as a sweet article~ Lightning protection: Irene remarried and gave birth to a child. The heroine Sisi is Harry's godfather and godmother (Sirius is also his godfather). It is estimated that ggad reunited after retirement (mentioned!). Sirius was really disgusting when he was a teenager. Everyone except Lily James survived QAQ

After reading the full text, I really like this Sijiao fanfic. The plain happiness is exactly what Sijiao craves in the original work. In this text, he meets his angel, his happiness, and his only one. He no longer stands alone in the darkness, he has his own sun, his own family, and care around him. Maybe the writing style is not the best, but it is the one that makes me feel the most happy in Sri Lanka. Every fanfic is a branch of other worlds. I hope that Sri Lanka in other worlds can always be happy, happy, and safe [Love] [Love] [Love] Of course, I also like the heroine very much, she is a lovely angel. It would be great if my mother could always be here.

It's super good-looking. Although some of the process in this book is very omitted, it does not affect the viewing. After seeing the chapter where Voldemort was eliminated, my heart slowly relaxed. Mia and Snape can finally live a good life without being as worried as before. As a Situ, the only thing I want to read is to make Sijiao happy. Every time I read some of it, I feel really comfortable. The ending of this book is perfect, making Mia and Snape happy forever. Like, it is very beautiful.