I Accidentally Won Over the Heroine of a Novel

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for five years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for eight years, and Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, and Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, and Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years. Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years In the year, Solanum nigrum waited for Longyang for 1000 years, and White Snake waited for Xu Xian In 1000, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu. In 2000, Su Jiuer waited. Feng Xi has been waiting for 3000 years, Xiyao has been waiting for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has been waiting for Changqing has three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update, some day and some month One day, a man was lying weakly on the bed, with a pale look on his face that could not be concealed. White. There was a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, his eyes The corners of his eyes glistened with tears. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update Watching it from beginning to end is a bit too prefaced and inconsistent with the postscript. One second I was there, and the next I was there again. It didn't match up at all. It was painful to watch. I quite like watching this kind of subject matter. It's just that there shouldn't be anything else in the middle.

Good books all have a strange name and a group of silent people [smile]

Overall, the book is average to above average, and the writing is acceptable. However, the details of some plots are not very good, and can even be said to be toxic. But if you lose your mind, this article is still good, and it is a good read in leisure time.

It's so good that I still want to read it after reading it, but I don't want to save it because I can't help but want to click in and read it! [Almost crying]

There are so many typos, so it's definitely the author's fault. [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] Give the author three suggestions. 1. There are too many typos. This can discourage 50% of people. Even if you update 5 chapters a day, you should pay attention to the typos and slow down the update. After all, you are publishing this book for others to read, not for yourself. Moreover, you have so many typos, which makes readers feel that you do not pay attention to this book and thus promote the book. 2. You directly analyzed the pros and cons of the protagonist's actions. The important thing is the losses. Nowadays, people like to read refreshing articles. Is it satisfying if you analyze the losses? I recommend that you don't analyze or analyze your mistakes. Unintelligent people will think it is a cool article. Smart people can leave comments to enhance the publicity of your book. 3. You write the male protagonist as too versatile, which leads readers to think that the female protagonist is useless, and thus questions your single female protagonist. You should not write that the male protagonist can cultivate, but should strengthen the realm of the female protagonist and make readers feel that the male and female protagonists are like a perfect match. It only represents my personal opinion, but I personally think that as long as you change these, not to talk about becoming a god, it will be easy to reach nine points. Most books with nine points cannot reach this level. It seems that the plot of the original book has collapsed, but in fact the plot of this book has collapsed. The reason is that the author has made the protagonist too invincible, the realm setting has collapsed, and there are too many logical problems. The author, the more you write, the worse the book becomes.

More than 80% of the visual angle settings on the Tomato platform are not amazing enough for this book. Using the author's perspective of recreating the world he wrote, and then modeling the magnificent original world, this novel perspective will give readers a very fresh feeling. I miss the mountains in the mountains, I belong to the mountain people but the mountains do not belong to me I am frightened by the mountain, but the mountain is not frightening. The mountain frightens me, and all my souls leave my heart. But this mountain was built up bit by bit by myself, every stone, tree, cave and protrusion, all by my own hands. When the foundation of the mountain is unstable and I need to risk my own life to prevent the mountain from overturning, where and what will I do? The characters have clear personalities and memorable points, the main plot is clear, the world is well rendered, the geography is differentiated, the organizational groups have conspicuous flags, the original protagonist is absolutely decent, not too dark, and has no negative emotions that affect the viewer's emotions.

Suddenly I found myself feeling lonely.

You can feel the author's changes, and you can also feel the author's unique style.

It's very interesting. From a reader's point of view, first of all, the proportion of emotional scenes between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is acceptable. Of course, the male protagonist did not regard the female protagonist as his own woman at the beginning (explained in the original plot book). After more than 200 scenes, the female protagonist began to regard the female protagonist as his own woman. The second male protagonist is not strong from the beginning (strength refers to the male protagonist's martial arts talent), but he is outstanding in other aspects. Third, although there is a system in the label, the system's presence is relatively low, and it is more about the male protagonist's resourcefulness. Fourth, the heroine's temperament is a little arrogant, but not in the traditional sense. It is only in the heart and not shown outside. Of course, by the 200 chapters of the book, she is almost convinced by the male protagonist. [This is my first time writing such a long comment. If you don't like it, please don't comment. It only represents my personal opinion]

Not updating? (Glancing up and down) (Cold eyes) Ha (Disdainful smile) Very good (Shaking the red wine glass) (Take a small sip) I have seen through your little trick (the corner of your mouth raised a sinister arc) It's just to attract my attention (Cold down the corners of his mouth coldly) However, you have to have a degree (eyes are three parts cold and four parts expectant, two parts proud and one part insouciant) It's best to update immediately (sneer) Don't force me to kneel down and beg you🙏 [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]