Blue Archive: The Sinner from the Dungeon

Well... Even though it's a student novel, I still want to see the real Disma. Because of me, I always add the image of the original Disma to the Disma of this work, which makes it very uncomfortable for me to read. It's well written.

The protagonist seems to be a character from a certain work who traveled back in time. The introduction was not written, so the first part of the story was foggy and I had no idea what it was about. I wrote a lot of long and hard-to-remember names. Later, I occasionally recalled people and things in the original world. It made people often wonder, "Who is this?" The protagonist keeps saying that he is guilty, but does not say anything about what he has done in the past. If you have not read the original work of the protagonist, it will be particularly confusing, because the author only wrote the settings in BA in detail, and there is basically no description of the other work. The protagonist's weapon is also a mystery. The "pistol" has a shotgun on the front, but it can actually suppress Hiyori using an anti-equipment sniper rifle from a long distance on the black market. It's hard to figure out what kind of weapon it is. This is really unfriendly to readers who have never read another work. There are a lot of private settings added in the text, such as the aura that will give you abilities, such as being able to make a flash pop out of thin air, and a very idealistic "inquiry test" for the college promotion exam, which seems to be a setting in another work? Halo also adds a "weak period" setting where your physical strength will be weakened if you are attacked. The protagonist's combat power is a glass cannon with high attack and low defense. He will be knocked unconscious after a few shots. In Kivotos, he is basically a large-scale trash can. It seems that there will be improvement in the future. If you don't mind these issues, it's still worth a look.

The author's books are being put to the test… Not bad Maybe it's because Darkest Dungeon is not very popular. I feel that the popularity of this book is not worthy of its quality. The whole book has some superfluous setting flaws (yes, I am talking about asking questions, but the impact is not big, which is why I gave one less star) It can be clearly seen that the author's writing style is gradually improving, and the adaptation of the main plot is also reasonable. I feel that the personality difference between Siti and the second boss in the original text is quite big (but if it was written according to the character of the second boss in the original text, it would be okay). However, Siti is ruthless when performing tasks and facing enemies, and acts coquettishly and cutely in front of the teacher. Just like our cute Hina, the contrast between Siti is very cute😇😋 The following is what I want to say to the author: Although this article is not very popular, I still ask you to write it down. "Endless suffering can also breed hope and inspire vitality!" (Maybe this quote is not particularly appropriate?) Readers' faith is being tested… ecstasy Ah, the author of the following article is still trying his best to put his heart and soul into it. I personally think that the part where Steve faces his sin is very well written, as if it is like a little glimmer of hope in the dark dungeon. In addition, the emotional scene between Steve and his teacher was so sweet that it made me roll on the bed, and the interaction between Steve and other students was also very interesting. Again, Xiao Siti is cute (^_^) So does the author have a group?

This is my second read, and it's very good-looking, but for me... It's still good-looking [laughing evilly]. I read this book just after finishing Sunless Blood Moon. It was hard to imagine the relationship between the dungeon and the world of Ba. The author's writing is great, but I don't know why the rating is so low. Obviously most of the book reviews are positive.

To be honest, this book did have some problems at the beginning. For example, it may not be easy to understand for those who don't understand the original world view of the protagonist. However, the quality is good later and the original world of the protagonist is gradually introduced. The plot and emotional line are also good. At present, except for the one mentioned at the beginning, there are basically no problems (the author has made some minor changes to his personal world view, but there are basically no problems)

The fantasy linkage between Dark Dungeon and Azure Files is also well written and deserves support.

The second-in-command on the cover looks like me, and the second-in-command who has changed his gender is alive.

I feel like the characterization is very three-dimensional, but I think the part about the alpha wolf is a bit sloppy. I don't know why? (◇) You can write more about the inner struggle of the alpha wolf, so as to better reflect his inner conflict as the protagonist's adoptive father, because the protagonist is his daughter, and he wants to see her, but he is afraid to see her because of the past.

I couldn't understand it before, so I haven't watched it for a long time. Later, I bought Dark Dungeon in Qiuchu and played it for more than ten hours (it only cost more than seven yuan [laughing]) and I can probably understand it. By the way, when and how much did the author spend to buy Dark Dungeon? [Sinister smile]

First of all, I don't know the story of the dungeon, so I only evaluate it from the BA's perspective. I have read seventy chapters so far, and the storyline is still very good. Some of the supplementary settings are also handled very well. At least they are not putting the cart before the horse like others. I am just curious how the author will deal with some of the relationship lines in the main line. This is the review first, let me take a look again:)