Stranger, If You Go to Kivo

The novel has its own unique flavor and ideas, which I have never seen in other BA fan fiction. For example, the four chapters of Red and White, I personally think are the stories with the most complete logic. The author's writing style is obviously written by a newcomer, and he is also a relatively traditional newcomer. On the one hand, it is developing towards light novels, but on the other hand, it has not got rid of the influence of traditional literature, and is shackles of traditional literature everywhere. In addition, my writing style is still lacking, which leads to some shortcomings, such as writing too long or too urgently. At the same time, the author followed the plot too closely (especially in the early plots), resulting in too much information. Fortunately, the author is now trying to change. Overall, it's a bit toxic (such as too many self-created characters), but it's not a major problem. The subsequent plot shows that the author has the intention and ability to control these settings.

There is potential, waiting for follow-up

I'm afraid this is a bit too fast.