The Beautiful Mage Gets Spirited Away by Her Contract Beast Again

Overall, it's pretty good. The descriptions of the protagonist's roommate and other people are very three-dimensional and vivid, which is really rare. The protagonist Miaomiao is also very cute, but I feel that Chi is a bit too humble in this relationship. It was not obvious when the pure brotherhood was in the front. Later, when Miaomiao went to contract the little bird, I felt that Chi was very suppressing himself. It made me very sad to see it, including the occupation of the contract mark later. I don't know how other people treat brothers. Maybe I have been thinking about it. Zhong tacitly admits that they are a couple, and they can't help but feel unfair to Chi. He wants Chi to wake up later and not be too hurt. Although Dada has described in Miaomiao's heart many times that "Chi is his most important brother", it really doesn't show through what he does. It always feels like every time he does something that he feels sorry for Chi, he must emphasize in his heart that "Chi is his most important person." (PS: Maybe I was too caught up in the drama. I really hid under the quilt and cried for the sake of their relationship. This should be the reason why the netizens laughed at me. Both the hero and the hero said it was okay, but only the netizens clamored to say that something was wrong. Hahaha)

If you like western fantasy themes, read this book The description of the forest chapter is really good, it feels like a fairy tale, and the characters are well drawn. The academy chapter is very typical, this is Long Aotian Shuang! It's just that we often forget that freshmen are actually young boys under 15. Geniuses gather together, Miaomiao's dormitory is composed of four people, representatives of the Water, Earth, Wind and Thunder Academy. It feels so good to be a team with such geniuses who are far superior to others. Miaomiao, you are a white-cut black cake, let me kiss you For now, I feel like I still have to write a lot more, so if you can't wait for serialization, be cautious () A very good little couple that made me roll over on the bed. The emotional lines were well written and the transitions were good. Chi is affectionate and patient (?), And respects Miaomiao enough that you can really feel the deep feelings for Miaomiao behind the concession. And Miaomiao also forced herself to give Chi an answer. Author, I like you woo woo

Read it from beginning to end, it's a great book with great potential! Looking forward to more updates, woo woo, baby Sanshui is really cute [love][love][love]

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It's okay. My wife can try to use less physical descriptions. It's a bit too repetitive. I can see the teacher's progress (whispering bb: I thought it was a cool novel, but it turned out not to be very happy. I feel that my wife really wanted to write some happy stories). In the article, Miaomiao is a genius, and the people around her are also geniuses, so I have no idea about levels. Chi's feelings for Miaomiao are a bit volatile. One moment it feels like a spoiled wife novel, and the other moment it feels like a strong character. Overall, the problem is not big. It can be seen that the teacher is a real mother. My final evaluation is: it is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. Looking forward to better works from the teacher! (*´I`*)

Come on author, although you are not very popular now, the story background and subject matter are very good, and the writing style is also very good. I believe that as long as you can persist, you will definitely become popular. However, the beginning is a bit weak. The beginning is the most attractive to readers. Generally speaking, the beginning determines whether readers will stay or not. I hope that your second book will be more mature and excellent for you now. I feel like I have discovered a treasure [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It feels very good. Although it is said to be a monster-killing, upgrading and cultivating system, it has always been Long Aotian's cool style (it has hidden strength but does not affect its coolness). Miaomiao is also very measured and cute! ! Chi is also very good, but the emotional line is in the later stage, and the early stage is basically the plot. It seems a bit too much, but it is still very satisfying to watch it for a few hours. The two little ones are also very cute and warm, the supporting characters are also very fragrant, and the most important thing is that the no-vice CP is really great. I like it like this! ! Two men + nurturing type (attack and shou all) + (attack) secret love comes true + save the world (?) + Warm little daily life + Long Aotian's cool writing + no bloody plot (such as the Virgin, chasing his wife in the crematorium, mouth sealed with glue) + long-haired beauty + getting married + having no children + the author is very, very awesome! ! Just look! Cool! ! ! ! !

It's really beautiful to look at the front. The author's words are as warm as early spring, like a fairy tale, about the cabin next to the clear lake, the loving grandfather and magical animal friends, and the warm fire and soft pillows~ Looking at the corpse makes me feel warm❤️ If time stays at this moment

Good-looking, Miaomiao (white and black are also very cute), very cute [send heart], Chi is also cute [send heart], Chi's positioning for himself when he was a child is also very funny [face covering], he always thought he was the knight who protects the princess, and the two grandfathers are evil dragons, but little does he know that he himself is the evil dragon who wants to take away the princess [laughing and crying], he always wanted to take Miaomiao away from the two grandfathers [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's very well written, in a style I've never seen before, and the plot is complete. Brief summary: Jiang Liujing is a dark elf. Because he was too strong, the leader of the elf clan and the strong men of other clans trapped him in a room while he was ignorant. He met Cyrus and became friends with him. Later, because of the disaster, he came out and met the Chi Po of the Po clan - Chi. Jiang united all races in the world to fight against Calamity, and Sai founded the divine religion. Jiang was the God of Law. After a period of confrontation with Calamity, Jiang found a way to eliminate Calamity. He went to the crack alone. To prevent Chi from dying, he trapped him with a magic circle and promised to let him out when he came back. Jiang stayed there for a long time until he became a god. Chapters 320 to 328 will be discussed