Genshin Impact Simulation: Starting as a Melusine's Friend

Beautiful, pure and simple, simply beautiful Xumi has been delayed for too long. It has not been finished for two months. The next chapter (I saw Chapter 227) probably won't be finished until Chapter 230. The 200th chapter is in the water. Just like the memories of One Piece, it is 20 episodes. It's too uncomfortable to watch it. It's better not to write this. It's so tiring to read. The three points are because the previous writing is really good. Let's wait for half a month. If you can't stand it anymore, you can change it if it gets better. If you can't change it, just continue to lower it. After three revisions, the back is full of water, just a lump. I added two stars and withdrawn. Those who are willing to wait for Akaishi can continue to wait. I will make a bold guess. Xumi will not be able to get married by Chapter 240. To sum up, the first 100 chapters are almost 50 chapters into a new plot. The next chapter is 200 chapters and it is still dragging on. It is all water.

The current overall trend includes the portrayal of the characters' emotions, the description of the Genshin Impact story line, and a deeper understanding of Xiaomei Luxin. The portrayal of each Meiluxin is very good. I think the description of the protagonist and the system is just right. Grasping this strength is the greatest asset of your book. There is also the emotional line of the protagonist. Dear A series of characterizations such as personal experience, self-sacrifice, etc., Paving the way to the scene where Carolee discovers that the protagonist appears again. The writing style and ideas are quite good. If you continue with your current ideas, there will be no problem. Write boldly. I, Kaitian Aya, admit that your book is well written and I look forward to you making a breakthrough in the world.

Book initial score 6 points Favorite game fan, +1 point Favorite game character, Nasida, +1 point Good logic, +1 point Favorite genre, emulator, +1 point Delicate description of emotions, +1 point Non-toxic points, +0 points The writing is normal, the character's IQ is normal, +0 points The total score is 11 points. If you get one more point, you will receive a reward of 10 yuan. I hope the author will continue his efforts.

It's really great to watch, needless to say the plot, and the writing is also very good. I loved it. (Quietly) The author is a bit short and weak... [Laughing] It was very unbearable to watch, it was over within a few minutes of watching it [I almost cried] The author works hard! [Laugh]

The author is trying a writing method that makes people unable to sleep at night, and he also wants to give the protagonist a hatchet (the sweetness of this book is comparable to the honey of a bear, so feel free to eat it) According to this update rate, this book can only be maintained, and if more people support it, the book will not survive for long, and it will end after five or six hundred chapters at most.

I finished reading it overnight and saw that the introduction said it was about Broken Knife. He did break the knife, but hey, it almost made me cry. It is worth recommending. Although there are some small flaws, the flaws are not outweighed. It is one of the few good Genshin Impact works by Tomato.

The writing is very good and the writing style is very good. Everyone must give the author a gift! Now that there are so many AI articles on Tomato, we can't let manual workers starve to death. Only the first two simulations were okay. What Xumi wrote was just like a female video article. It was all about the emotional line and the Shura field. Chapter 273 ran away and I couldn't watch it anymore.

I love and hate the author. The protagonist simulated it very well. He single-handedly made up for the regrets, but made himself a new regret. The early simulation was as beautiful as candy, and the back was a real knife. The author really made me eat it willingly. In the end, come on, author, the writing is quite good.

Purely subjective evaluation: This novel is not exciting and has no emotional line. Purely write some knives. Add some scenes for the heroine that are not particularly intuitive. It can be boring. Overall, it's a little bit toxic, but nothing serious. I usually only click on this kind of audiobook when I can't concentrate on reading, or maybe I can't hear clearly, because I'm afraid of missing key information in other novels, but I'm not afraid of this one.

It's so beautiful, but it's a pity that Kavin seems to be half uncomfortable🦌