After I Wronged the Villainous Disciple I Raised, I Faked My Death

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The plot is still good and very compact, but because I think more about logic, I always wonder why, and find that the logic is not correct and the details are lacking, but overall it is okay. If the logic and the cause and effect can be smoothly self-consistent, the score will be much better.

The writing is very good, and the descriptions of the scenery are quite vivid. I also quite like the character of the male protagonist. The rhythm is tight, and some parts are a bit longer. Judging from the content and plot, the male protagonist is simply ruthless and miserable. If he is not ruthless to others, he will be the one who gets suppressed. When I was young, I didn't have a mother, and everyone bullied her. The heroine was abandoned ➕1️⃣ times due to the sudden evaporation of the plot. And because of the mission, she could only give it to the original male protagonist because of the mission. There were many misunderstandings. She married Taozhi while pretending to be a waiter, but when she woke up, she was gone and abandoned ➕2️⃣. It hurt me to see that drop of tears. In the Ice Silkworm Cave, there is deep love and deep hatred. "If I don't die today, it will be this world, Cheng Yuzhi, and you who will die." So handsome! But when they met again, he still couldn't bear to be cruel... If the gender were changed, it would be my sadistic article [I'm about to cry] When I met him, he looked like his head was not very bright [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] The heroine is really stupid! ! But her body is originally a tree, with the head of a peach tree. She just wants to complete the task. She doesn't know how the male protagonist has been during the hundred years without her. The Duoteng is really touching the male protagonist's heart.

Although there are few people watching it and few comments, it is super beautiful! Better than many high-scoring popular works! The writing style is witty but steady and mature. The writing style is very good. The plot and characters are connected throughout the article. The writing is rigorous and fascinating. It makes people want to keep reading. The male protagonist is quite miserable. In terms of relationships, the male protagonist relied on the female protagonist when he was a child. Later, the female protagonist left without saying goodbye and missed the female protagonist. After they reunited, she fell in love with the female protagonist. However, looking at this, the female protagonist has never felt anything about the male protagonist. In addition, the female protagonist needs to complete the main plot tasks of the male protagonist in the original book. Everything is based on the original male protagonist. She will give the original male protagonist various treasures and preferential treatment. If she chooses one of the two, she will also choose the original male protagonist. I feel that the overall emotional line will be more abusive to the male protagonist.

This little author is so bad. There are only more than fifty chapters. I order you to update as soon as possible [Hold][Hold]

Overall, I feel that the male protagonist is a bit unreasonable. He has been stepped on by the second male lead to climb up. Moreover, the female protagonist's relationship has been erratic. The male protagonist has abused his body and mind from beginning to end. Overall it's okay, the ending is good

Why is the rating so low for such a good-looking book? It's really good. The whole text has a humorous tone, but the process is a bit sadistic. It's a bit of a laugh~ When I read it, I laughed until my stomach hurt. But the ending is very good, but this rating is a bit disappointing. It's really good... I have abandoned the novels I have read recently after reading a few chapters. This article did not jump at all from beginning to end. I really recommend it~

The emotions are delicate, especially the male protagonist's emotional descriptions. I just feel that the female protagonist is a bit nervous and slow. Many female protagonists' emotional descriptions are not very deep. I feel that the female protagonist loves herself more than the male protagonist. Overall, it is good.

After reading it, I really like the story framework. The author's positioning of the novel is very accurate, and it deserves a higher score in this positioning. The whole story is sweet but not boring. The author is also great, he has writing skills, and many of the pictures are beautifully described. Keep up the good work.

I just discovered that I have read another book by the author and liked it very much. The author really writes well and I like them all. I want to wait for Yazi who can't help but wait for the hero