I Raised a Sword Immortal

Very good, men and women are reborn and raised as female protagonists to develop the family 1. Single heroine, no ambiguity, the heroine is online throughout the whole process. From the beginning to the end, the hero and heroine have been together and never separated. There is no such bloody plot as forced separation. Apart from the heroine, there are very few other female supporting characters. There are no various ambiguous scenes where women are relied on to push the plot. It is very good. 2. How come the male protagonist is also reborn and feels like he has no skills? The female protagonist and her apprentice have been looking for the cultivation techniques everywhere, but they don't have any. 3. The main plot is to develop a heroine and cultivate immortality in the family. The overall look is very good, and there is basically no poisonous point.

A very interesting author. It would be great if the male major could finally become a Nascent Soul and rewrite history. He could go back to the previous life and have Nascent Soul cultivation and abolish the Heartless Curse. He would write down the details of the previous life to add [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Overall, it's okay. Although I prefer harems, this book is probably about a single woman. However, I hope that Xiao Yao'er will remember the killing of the male protagonist in her previous life when she pulls out the divine sword (the divine sword is an artifact in this interface, so it should be able to affect some rules. , It is not too abrupt to carry some causal fragments), so that she will know why the male protagonist had a strong murderous intention towards her but was hesitant to kill her when they first met, and why he hated the Black Dragon King, the Tianyi Sect, the monk, and the True Monarch Taxue so much. In this way, Xiao Yao'er will hate Master Taxue who blocked her emotions in her previous life and made her kill the person she loves the most, and cherish this love that spans all lives even more.

It's so beautiful. I haven't seen such a beautiful fairy tale in a long time. I just don't know when Xiao Yao'er and her master will achieve enlightenment. The plot is good, but they are not sweet enough. A little regretful

It's quite good, there's no moisture, and it doesn't deliberately suppress the realm, but it doesn't feel that interesting [face covering]

It's pretty good, but I don't know why so few people watch it.

The author can write the second part, about the realm on the Nascent Soul, and it can be written well, and he can add more emotional interactions between the male and female protagonists. The emotional rendering of the ending needs to be improved. Using the environment, the protagonist's emotional interaction and pouring out his heart can make it better ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ

To be honest, this book still has strength. I can't say it doesn't, but the author's writing style is still improving. Maybe the next book will be the author's growth. In the era of fast food, we readers are also following suit. We do not rule out that this is the demand of the times, and patient works take time. I really like this book, the pace is just right. It also looks comfortable, just like the person you like, you will like it not on the surface, but on the inside. The bad thing is that the author just lacks the feeling. The author did it, and it should have become a hit. (Subjective feelings, please correct me if wrong) There is also an emotional aspect, will it come after this battle is over?

It's better than most of the books in Tomato, but it's just not that popular, which is a pity.

It's okay. I most agree with one sentence in the article (If you want to become an immortal, be a human first! The word immortal can never be separated from the word human. If you give up being a human and give up humanity for the sake of strength, will you still be an immortal?)!