Something's Not Right About My Wife

At the beginning of more than 60 chapters, it suddenly felt like a different story, with no details like a running account, and the plot jumped back and forth so much that it was not clear how it developed like this. .

Rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish

Take it off the shelves. Really, even elementary school students can write better than him.

I was confused. Big jump in the middle. It's so outrageous that his mother opened the door for outrageous things. What the hell? The first sentence doesn't follow the next sentence. Even a primary school student's composition is better than yours. The topic is in a foreign country.

The heroine is dead at the beginning, but even before ten chapters, she pretends to be dead and starts drinking with the hero. This is too casual.

Even the donkeys in the production team can pull better than this two-parter.

Did I read it wrong? The plot jumped by leaps and bounds and the heroine was replaced? [What]

The bull's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong.

It's like a primary school student writing a composition, with a beginning and no end.

Waste of time,