Commoner Naruto: Working Part-Time with Mind-Reading Techniques

Very nice! Genjutsu is one of the three major power systems of ninjas. In the original book, there are very few people who become strong through it, which obviously makes them unbearable to learn. The potential of illusion is very great, it will not be weaker than ninjutsu and taijutsu, and it is very possible to become a god through illusion.

Good looking, update soon The idea is pretty good so far, and there are no obvious shortcomings. The main character is always flat, which makes people think that he will be bad in the next chapter. Normal thinking book

The writing is good, it doesn't focus too much on the plot characters and has its own path. In line with normal people's IQ. There is a suggestion that the author doesn't mind. The protagonist can develop a mental oppression, refer to the overlord color in One Piece. Come on, author.

I really like the setting of this novel, and the author's writing skills are also very good, but I don't like the second setting very much. If it weren't for those outrageous second settings, I think it would be easy to get a score of 9.2. This second setting strengthens the daimyo too much. I am really afraid that one day the daimyo of Yuno Kuni and the daimyo of those countries will call out their ancestors in sage mode and capture them for the God of Otsutsuki to have children when they are unhappy. It feels like When Madara and Hashirama meet the Daimyo of the Fire Country, they have to kneel down and be like their grandsons. The power of the Daimyo is so powerful. The country's bodyguards all use natural energy magic. I feel like Jiraiya went to Mt. Myoboku to learn it🥚. When he comes back, I don't know if the Six Paths Sage can defeat the Fire Country Daimyo's bodyguards or protect the Twelve Ninjas. These enhanced designs look too uncomfortable, but I really like the writing style and setting. I'll give it four stars.

It's interesting, but if the plot doesn't change at all, I'll just follow it [Chigua] [Chigua] Is there any difference whether there is a protagonist or not? [What] [What]

It's okay, but the original plot is basically unchanged, and what was supposed to happen still happened. The main character and the supporting camera are the same

I would like to give you a five-star encouragement. I have read several novels about civilian ninjas before, but most of them did not have much of a civilian feel. They basically had too much contact with the core members. The civilian features of this book are more prominent, which is quite interesting. It felt pretty good at the beginning, but in the next two hundred chapters or so, the plot of traveling from the future back to the present time made the original content a bit confusing.

In the Hokage whose blood is supreme, there is no cheating or cheating. He slowly develops his own system structure based on understanding and research, which is very good, and his combat power does not collapse. The development of the Yin Escape attribute of this hand is comparable to that of a movie I have seen - starting from Konoha and escaping from Konoha. The protagonist develops human senjutsu from healing ninjutsu and finally goes deep into the research of soul ninjutsu.

It's not bad, but it feels like it's written too peacefully, or like the anime, the profession of ninja is written too brightly. The ninja from Naruto's perspective basically feels like a righteous adventurer. However, there are many dark-biased tasks in the ninja missions, such as assassinations, thefts, stealing intelligence, and even triggering wars. The essence of the ninja group is an armed violent gang driven by profit, rather than the so-called will of fire, a regular guardian driven by the will of faith. Well, I am a supporter of that kind of conspiracy theory. I can't help it. If I don't have a conspiracy theory, I can't understand the plot at all.

It is one of the few Naruto fandoms that does not have bitter hatred and dark clouds, and it does not pursue the abilities of Senju and Uchiha right from the beginning. It makes me feel relaxed [facepalm][facepalm]