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Everything in the world can be used as an elixir. This idea is excellent. The style of doing things is really good. The astringency is okay. Others are so-so. There are many typos and occasionally the settings are broken. There are more and more setting loopholes

The writing is very good, and the system is also very well written. Each side door has clear promotions, such as alchemy cultivation, talisman cultivation, formation cultivation, and weapon cultivation. The routes are very clear. The world view is also large, it is relatively relaxed, and there are adjustments suitable for long-term reading.

The talent was so awesome at the beginning, but it was surpassed by the players in a short while. It is not a cool article. I don't know if it is assisted by AI, but the previous book about Naruto is quite good.

The current 100,000-word plot ideas are very good, and the training system is very groundbreaking. As long as the combat power does not collapse, it will be no problem to write a million words [Thinking]

There are obvious traces of AI, and there are too many inconsistencies. The ninth level of Qi training in the front was almost the tenth level, and the ninth level of Qi training was broken through again in the back. Jian Piaomiao broke through the tunnel foundation in the front, and turned into the twelfth level of Qi training in the back. But the plot is indeed okay, I'm really speechless. Everything else is fine. The AI is too bad. There are too many inconsistencies. I feel really defeated.

The flaw is that there are a lot of typos, but there are no other major flaws. It's pretty good. Come on.

Although it is suspected of being AI, the story and setting are super nice, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great!

Dharma cultivation, alchemy cultivation, formation cultivation, sword cultivation. Traditional Dharma master, material assistant. Now, My elixirs are also reusable. My elixirs can also be combined in a formation. My elixir can also be released like a talisman. .

Man, it looks fine from the front. When it comes to the last few chapters, especially the otherworld one. Well. What I want to read, buddy, is a cool article. Maybe it's because there are too few chapters now, and it would feel baffling to write those foreshadowings.

Why hasn't it been updated for several days? Is this book going to be finished?

The idea is great, there's nothing too bloody about the plot, and it's full of creativity.

Drug prohibition in the Mid-Autumn Festival. Don't give up an inch of ground! China's anti-drug campaign will not give in an inch of ground! ! !

It's well written, but the pace is too slow. It's 98 pictures and it hasn't established a foundation yet.

It's a very interesting book about cultivating immortals, please come on ✊

The idea is very good and profound. Various schools of cultivating immortals have unique methods.

Why is the score so low?

I really don't want to give you 4 stars, but 3 stars is not very polite.

How many novel protagonists have you named?

It was 5 stars in the early stage, but after the Danta Conference, it was only a little over 3 stars.

I like the quality, the writing is very good

Damn it, I didn't expect it to be a book by this author. I give it five stars. The previous Naruto series was also good. I feel like my writing is getting more and more off track.

The unconstrained setting of the alchemy furnace is so amazing! Everything can be thrown in, and the quality of the novel feels pretty good.

The world view is huge, but the content has some minor flaws. As long as it doesn't crash, it's great. Fast updates and extra rebates. The name and cover have been changed. Why haven't they been updated yet? It's been down for half a month.

I really doubt it's the emperor's uncle

Yes, it's well written.

Beautifully written and novel in subject matter.

The idea is novel and very interesting

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Yes, it's pretty.

It's a headache to look at the inner and outer doors