
I Asked You to Write Xianxia! Why Did You Write Naruto: Naruto?
让你写仙侠!你写火影:鸣人?
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- 770k Words
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- 2y ago
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- You Were Asked to Write a Xianxia Script! So Why Did You Write the Sage of Six Paths?让你写仙侠剧本!你写六道仙人?Alternate title on Fanqie
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The plot changes are generally quite good. However, there are some scenes I feel shouldn't have been cut, such as the scene between Haku and Zabuza at the end, and a few others. I hope the author will pay attention to these changes in the future.
Author, I hope you won't weaken the characters like you did in the second book. I hope you can include the ninjutsu that wasn't in the manga but only described in the setting in your novel. This would increase their combat power, especially for Naruto and Sasuke.
Having read several novels on the theme of writing books, this one and another, "I'm Not a Medicine God," are the best. The title changes are also quite good, unlike some others that are particularly awkward. There aren't too many comments or mentor remarks in the plot, so it's not too padded; it's just right and worth reading. I just don't really like the names of a few characters and ninjutsu, but I've read comments where others think they're good. It's all about personal taste.
Level 8 has appeared. After Kai Huang finishes his ultimate move, shouldn't he say something like, "Stand behind me and live on with a smile"?
Great, giving the character a name is excellent.
It's not bad. The pacing is a bit too fast at the beginning, glossing over the very important Land of Waves. It's a shame about Zabuza and Haku. The later parts are much better. Also, there's almost no suspense in the character introductions; everything is revealed.
You can keep the Naruto content brief, since everyone's seen it. Just write a brief overview, including some classic quotes, battles, and plot points. The key is audience interaction and comparisons with other characters—that's what makes it exciting.
As of now, among those who write this type of book, I, Long, would call you the strongest.
Dude, I'm just saying, there's no need to change everything, right? The Eight Gates Formation is Chinese, for crying out loud, is it really necessary to change it? And then there's Gaara. There's really no need to change his name to Sara. Do you think there's even a surname like "Gaara" in Japan? Changing it to Sara completely removes the meaning of love from his name.
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