I Asked You to Write Xianxia! Why Did You Write Naruto: Naruto?

The plot changes are pretty good. There are some plots that I think should not be deleted, such as Shiro and Zabuza, the last paragraph, and some others. I hope the author can pay attention to it in the future.

Author, I hope you will not weaken the characters like the second book. I hope you can put the ninjutsu that is not in the manga and only describe it in the setting in your novel. The combat power will be improved, especially for Naruto and Sasuke. Especially for that one, if you originally put the ninjutsu in the manga If you go up, ah, no, if you put it in, then Sasuke's strength will be greatly improved. The same is true for Naruto. Anyway, you have let yourself go. It won't be a problem if you let yourself go a little more. They have all been changed to multi-demon changes. It won't be a big problem for me to change a little more. If the plot can be changed, let's change it. After all, you have turned the hot-blooded manga into a fairy fantasy suit. If the plot remains intact, then to be honest, it doesn't make much sense. Where the plot can be changed, let's change it. After all, you have turned the hot-blooded manga into a fairy tale fantasy suit. If the plot remains intact, then to be honest, it doesn't make much sense. Especially the plot of Sasuke can be slightly changed. Well, his behavior in the later period is indeed a bit out of control, although it is understandable. But some of them are still a bit over-depicted. Anyway, your book's current performance seems not to be ideal, and the ratings are the same. You might as well open up your own imagination. Judging from your writing style, you are not a newbie in online writing. You have at least read the book for a long time, so some of the plots can be changed. If you really can't change those famous scenes that are touching, don't change them, but some details or places that are very uncomfortable can be changed, so you should change it, especially Obito is very uncomfortable.

I have read several novels about book writing. This one and the other one about me not being the god of medicine are the best. The name change is okay. It is not as awkward as the others. There are not many barrages and comments from the instructor in the plot. It is not too watery. It is just right. It is worth reading. I just don't like the name of some characters and ninjutsu. But some people think it is good after reading the comments. Everyone has their own tastes. It depends on the person.

The eighth-level heaven has come out. After Kaihuang kicked off the big game, why don't you say a word and stand behind me with a smile and live on?

Very good, just giving the character a name is very good,

Not bad. It's just that the progress at the front was very fast, and the very important Country of Waves was brought over with a few strokes. Zabuza and Haku regret it. The back is pretty good. There is also almost no suspense about character introductions, everything is revealed.

There can be less content about Naruto. After all, I have seen it all, so just write it down. Write down some classic quotes, classic battles and plots. The focus is on the interaction between the audience and comparison with other players. This is the fun part.

For now, writing this type of book, I would call you the strongest.

No, buddy, let's just say that some things don't need to be completely changed, right? Ba Men Dun Jia is from China. Is it necessary to change it? There is also Gaara. There is really no need to change this name to Sara. Do you think there is a Gaara surname in Japan? Changing the name to Sharo completely loses the meaning of love. How does this reflect his mother's love for him? Oh my god, why did the curse seal change when I saw it later? Change it to Linglong Seal? Do you think this is appropriate? There is really no need to forcefully change it, it looks very awkward.

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