Civilian Hokage: Start Working with Mind-Reading Skills

Very nice! Genjutsu is one of the three major power systems of ninjas. In the original book, there are very few people who become strong through it, which obviously makes them unbearable to learn. The potential of illusion is very great, it will not be weaker than ninjutsu and taijutsu, and it is very possible to become a god through illusion.

Good looking, update soon The idea is pretty good so far, and there are no obvious shortcomings. The main character is always flat, which makes people think that he will be bad in the next chapter. Normal thinking book

The writing is good, it doesn't focus too much on the plot characters and has its own path. In line with normal people's IQ. There is a suggestion that the author doesn't mind. The protagonist can develop a mental oppression, refer to the overlord color in One Piece. Come on, author.

I really like the setting of this novel, and the author's writing skills are also very good, but I don't like the second setting very much. If it weren't for those outrageous second settings, I think it would be easy to get a score of 9.2. This second setting strengthens the daimyo too much. I am really afraid that one day the daimyo of Yuno Kuni and the daimyo of those countries will call out their ancestors in sage mode and capture them for the God of Otsutsuki to have children when they are unhappy. It feels like When Madara and Hashirama meet the Daimyo of the Fire Country, they have to kneel down and be like their grandsons. The power of the Daimyo is so powerful. The country's bodyguards all use natural energy magic. I feel like Jiraiya went to Mt. Myoboku to learn it🥚. When he comes back, I don't know if the Six Paths Sage can defeat the Fire Country Daimyo's bodyguards or protect the Twelve Ninjas. These enhanced designs look too uncomfortable, but I really like the writing style and setting. I'll give it four stars.

It's interesting, but if the plot doesn't change at all, I'll just follow it [Chigua] [Chigua] Is there any difference whether there is a protagonist or not? [What] [What]

It's okay, but the original plot is basically unchanged, and what was supposed to happen still happened. The main character and the supporting camera are the same

I would like to give you a five-star encouragement. I have read several novels about civilian ninjas before, but most of them did not have much of a civilian feel. They basically had too much contact with the core members. The civilian features of this book are more prominent, which is quite interesting. It felt pretty good at the beginning, but in the next two hundred chapters or so, the plot of traveling from the future back to the present time made the original content a bit confusing.

In the Hokage whose blood is supreme, there is no cheating or cheating. He slowly develops his own system structure based on understanding and research, which is very good, and his combat power does not collapse. The development of the Yin Escape attribute of this hand is comparable to that of a movie I have seen - starting from Konoha and escaping from Konoha. The protagonist develops human senjutsu from healing ninjutsu and finally goes deep into the research of soul ninjutsu.

It is one of the few Naruto fandoms that does not have bitter hatred and dark clouds, and it does not pursue the abilities of Senju and Uchiha right from the beginning. It makes me feel relaxed [facepalm][facepalm]

It's not bad, but it feels like it's written too peacefully, or like the anime, the profession of ninja is written too brightly. The ninja from Naruto's perspective basically feels like a righteous adventurer. However, there are many dark-biased tasks in the ninja missions, such as assassinations, thefts, stealing intelligence, and even triggering wars. The essence of the ninja group is an armed violent gang driven by profit, rather than the so-called will of fire, a regular guardian driven by the will of faith. Well, I am a supporter of that kind of conspiracy theory. I can't help it. If I don't have a conspiracy theory, I can't understand the plot at all.

It's a good book. It's a relatively slow-paced book, but it's not particularly slow. It's also the first one I've seen in a Naruto movie where a character gets married and has a baby. It's quite novel. The main character's wife is Iris, the daughter of Ichiraku Otsutsuki.

It's a very daily novel, with no ups and downs. The protagonist becomes stronger step by step by developing illusions. The characters in the original show have basically not changed. The third generation is still in the position of Hokage. He dies in the same way as in the original plot. Konoha F4 should be lit up in the sky, so I can't stand it anymore. It's not exciting, and there are no ups and downs. I've read more than 200 chapters. , I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist in the author's book is a world that feels the same without me. Although he never changes the plot, the butterfly's wings have not moved. It stands to reason that it should be a different ninja world. Maybe the author can't write it and will just stick to the original plot. So what's so good about it? There are still many shortcomings. I won't mention them and have forgotten them. But this novel also has its advantages. After all, not everyone likes fighting and killing, or reading novels. People who like daily life are really good to read this novel. If you don't get entangled or don't care about the shortcomings, it will be very good, so I give it 4 [love]

The protagonist is considered to be powerful now. It seems that everything is more or less than him. There are definitely some plots that can increase the protagonist's sense of presence. It is equivalent to re-watching the plot from the perspective of the protagonist, which means looking at daily life and reviewing the plot.

I went and I actually finished reading it in one sitting [laughing evilly] It really wasn't a bad ending, it was a serious ending [like] How should I put it? The protagonist of this book is the first one I have seen get married, and the one with the clearest sense of position. The point is there is no system, no system, no system! ! ! It can be said that this is a breath of fresh air in the general writing method of most Naruto fan portraits looking for tailed beasts to borrow power and create a Sharingan or something. They are really just doing genjutsu Yinfu, and occasionally do billions of other things. And the author likes to rub some other things into it. If nothing else, Bajitian and Golden Skyline are so awesome [Like] Of course, the most outstanding thing is actually the short essay where the author has his own psychological activities at the end of almost every chapter [laughing evilly] That's the main feature [Like] It's so cool to watch [Read carefully] Overall, this is a pretty good Naruto book. The fanfic is neither general nor clichéd, and can even be read with a little bit of thinking in the early and middle stages. I directly recommend it to everyone with five stars [Like] I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Love]

This book's score of 8.7 Is definitely low. There is no other reason, because the author's basic writing skills are flawless, and more importantly, the author has found his own way. He is not the same Sharingan and Rinnegan over and over again, but specifically writes about a commoner who develops illusions to the extreme. When I saw Chapter 214 of the Chuunin Exam, the author forced Kiba, who had been trained hard and was much stronger than the original, to lose to Naruto. The reason was that he was worried about spoiling the plot and losing the prophet's advantage. I immediately lost the desire to read. It's already Chapter 214! The protagonist's strength is already the best in the ninja world! Are you saying now that you still want the story to follow the original plot? ! I take back my previous review, an 8.7 Score definitely does not underestimate this book.

It's beautiful, and it ranks third among all Naruto stories in my opinion. The second one is "Escape from Konoha", which would have been ranked first if it hadn't been written down later. The first one is "The Scourge of Naruto". Both of these two books are unsystematic. The protagonist has never even read Naruto and has no idea about the plot. Only represents personal views

It looks good. One of my favorite things is that he is not here to save the ninja world, nor does he save all of them. This makes the protagonist really a human being. There are also some ill-considered ways in which he needs help from other people, which is really cool. Nowadays, many novels travel to various worlds just for the purpose of saving. Even if they are written, whether they are written for the purpose of saving, everyone will be saved in the end. It feels like the protagonist himself is not a person at all, he is just a tool for salvation. But this novel is different. His starting point is for his family. For the sake of his family, he studies hard, and he does not get rid of all the suffering. He is not an omniscient and omnipotent God.

The content is very good, and the protagonist's combat power system is very novel. The only dissatisfaction is that when the protagonist's combat power explodes in the later stage, he is wandering on the line of fun, but not completely happy. He is very strong, but he always says that he cannot use his full strength because he is afraid of being exposed, and then he is afraid of being studied by the enemy, afraid that his family will be in danger, and he is afraid that the village will put a burden on him.

I have always wanted to be a civilian ninja, and my ninjutsu is its own. I have read a lot of Naruto fan novels that start as civilians and can be read in the early stage. In the middle and late stages, some bloodlines are forced in, such as Sharingan, Rinnegan, Byakugan and so on... I hope the author will keep it! ! Come on! !

At present, it seems to be similar to Nikgaru style or road novel. The protagonist does not have enough internal drive and the identity of the time traveler is less played. However, the author's ability to write about daily life needs to be improved. Naruto is also a hot-blooded manga. I recommend explaining it in the introduction, but overall it is not bad.

It's great, but it's a pity that I'm listening to a book, and I can't even see the pictures you've included. Wow, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh. Naruto's place is pretty good! Then two years passed, and there was still a heroine, but they didn't say they were together! Then we talked about getting married, which was a bit boring. Also, the main character was quite powerful in the front, but he was a bit weak when going to the border. It was so slow to fight a Jonin. I heard more than 100 pictures. After more than 100 pictures, the plot became uninteresting.

Overall, it's okay, worth five points. The only thing I'm unhappy about is, what kind of thing is the Hoshito Iron Wire? It's just a character that I don't even know exists if you don't write it. Why did Anko take advantage of him? At least I can accept Iruka, and Anko happens to be working in the school later on.

Although many new ninjutsus have been made and many back tricks have been hidden, the whole novel has not changed much from the plot of Naruto. Reading the entire novel is like reviewing Naruto all over again. The protagonist married the earliest wife I have ever seen, and she gave birth to four children so quickly. For now, the most refreshing ones for me are those educational ninjutsu (such as simulated battlefields), and illusions (manipulating mass, distance, shape, five senses, deceiving the world) are indeed very powerful, but the highlight moment seems to be only during the fourth battle (and I did not use my full strength at this time) The transition time looks okay, but not a lot of fun, so four stars is fine.

It is a life novel with a slow pace and not much changes to the original work. The protagonist gives himself some back-ups, which is equivalent to insurance. He basically does not care about some things that happen. There are not many flaws. It is a pretty good novel.

I've read Chapter 33 so far, and I think it's okay. I don't give it 5 stars because it was too painful to watch, with frequent typos and awkward sentences. It's like this. It's really not great. Although I know what it means when I read it, it's still quite influential. Once or twice, it's not much, but it's different. The author is quite active in the comments. I suggest that the author check it before uploading it. I haven't read the rest of it yet. If it's changed later, just pretend I didn't say it.

It's very interesting, and I prefer it for daily use, but damn, I felt so sad when I saw the scene where 2-year-old Naruto was looking for someone to hug on the street but was rejected and scolded [crying]

The article is very on topic. The whole novel is about the life of a moderately powerful civilian ninja. When I read it, I felt that the life of an elite jounin in the Naruto manga could be summarized. If you want to read a regretful or enjoyable article, you can consider it more. Of course, it is possible that the author changed the content later, but because it is a civilian article, I feel that it is unlikely. Since the author has worked so hard to write it, I will give it a full star.

It has its own ideas, unlike other novels that are either blood stains or eyes. It is better to evolve human beings by themselves and not rely on the power of the alien Otsutsuki, including eye contact lenses. It is still the pride of the human race.

Now that I have read Chapter 271, it is actually not bad. If I say what impressed me the most in this book, it was the protagonist vs. Payne. I like Gojo Master so much. The sentence that the protagonist shouted out was so touching. It is a pity that my Gojo Master skill is very strong. Unfortunately, it is not given to the protagonist. This is my regret after reading this article. I gave it three stars mainly because it is a bit biased towards daily writing, which makes the battles so exciting! Not much, and it didn't leave much of an impression on me, and there were no high-octane moments. My evaluation of a book: It is the impression it left on me and made me read it with pleasure. Therefore, for me, this article is very average, but the setting is very good. The illusion that was very inconspicuous in the original work has now achieved a great status. It has jumped out of the limitations of the original Naruto novel, either flying thunder god or wood escape. I hope the author can give me a big one in the Fourth Ninja War. After all, the front is too casual [face covering], and in the later stage, it will only be a support, right? There is also the author's emotional drama. Although the author really wants to find a wife, he seems to know that he is not good at writing and does not write too much. I can only say that he does it well. I don't want to take too much poison. Summary: Four stars, one for the author himself, one for Gojo Satoru-sensei (selfishness) [heartfelt], the remaining two are updated by the author every day and break away from the limitations of the original Naruto novel.

It's really beautifully written. I will give 4 stars to the white-haired prototype of Spell Return. If it is 5 stars, I am afraid that others will say that I am just cheating. Also, please develop more ninjutsu and combat. You can write less on daily basis and update it quickly.