Senior Brother Villain, All My Junior Sisters Have Been Reborn

I can't read content like this on "Goose Star" alone.

It's okay. I read the novel Long Aotian, the protagonist of suffering. I have two suggestions: 1. Change the rebirth to the final character or write the heroine's past life relationship line as cleanly as possible (it doesn't matter whether you change this or not. The main reason is that the most popular Brother Halo novel is rebirth, but the comic changed it to the last character) 2. It's good to add new things. It's better to mix it up a little bit, but focus on current writing. Otherwise, this book will be taken off the shelves. The reason is that all the villains I can find, such as the rebirth of senior brothers and sisters, have been taken off the shelves. So there is no one left, so I will add more in half a year or in a few months. The above are just my personal suggestions. If you don't like it, don't spray it.

Acceptable. I can accept the character of the protagonist. There is also formal style. Now it depends on how the author writes the heroine. Those who are reborn mainly depend on how they repent and take action. Just like giving a life or something. Later, the protagonist was moved and resurrected them, which I can accept. If I write casually and add him to the harem, I guess it will be over. I can only give you one star review.

He has quite a personality and is the toughest male protagonist I have ever seen among villains. A real man who has been broken by the heroine 99 times in his reincarnation, who says he must forgive? All I can say is that dim street lights cannot illuminate the entire street, and no matter how hard I try, I can't reach your heart.

He has quite a personality and is the toughest male protagonist I have ever seen among villains. A real man who has been broken by the heroine 99 times in his reincarnation, who says he must forgive? All I can say is that dim street lights cannot illuminate the entire street, and no matter how hard I try, I can't reach your heart.

The system is overbearing. If you don't follow the plot, you will be punished by kneeling for 3 days. It's so good. I recommend everyone to watch it. . . .

So far, it looks pretty good. The protagonist is not the kind of junior sister who just cries and says, "Junior sister tortured me a thousand times, I treat my junior sister like my first love." It's just that these junior sisters and master are too ignorant of themselves. According to the current plot, they didn't know how much fun they had in their previous life, and now they are pretending to be a big-tailed wolf. It's a bit embarrassing [face covering] Keep it up

"The sword is not a weapon, but the human heart is. If the heart is upright, the sword will be bright, and if the sword is bright, the Tao will be perfected." If Lin Fan's master had this understanding, how could he be one of Jackie Chan's Aotian harem who had a blind heart in his previous life. There is no remorse from Master Leng in this life, and there is no improvement in cultivation. The only change in this life is that he does not practice double cultivation with Long Aotian, so this understanding does not fit the character of Miss Leng.

"Brother Villain—The Master and Junior Sister who have healed demons haunted me" Now all the problems have been solved

I like this type of writing very much. I personally feel that the author writes very well. I hope the author can continue to write