From the Start: My Ability Is to Be Reborn

When I saw someone eating Obito's CP, I summarized Obito's information. I hope everyone can share Obito's information—— Obito: Lin, you don't want Kakashi to be blind for the rest of his life, right? Kakashi, you don't want others to know about the stain of mission failure, right? Minato-sensei, I didn't disappoint you, right? (Referring to the Battle of Kannabi Bridge) #Two people rescued me, but I was the third one (alone) #Even in a desperate situation, Huang Mao didn't get me #boy, the cohabitation life of a red-eyed senior and a white-skinned social cow #pivacation (referring to getting along with each other in the blood mist and other incidents)

A very good idea, bold and innovative with an ending. The entire world line has been changed, the original story has been carefully considered, and the understanding of the original story is also very deep. I started writing Pirates after 8W words. To be honest, how many male videos like watching female bodies? In addition, after completing a major challenge, I was reborn directly. The only thing that differs from the dream ending is the name. Points must be deducted for the dream ending. Secondly, I am really too lazy to watch One Piece. Firstly, I am Cloud, and secondly, I don't watch Girls. So no evaluation. But I must say that there are three elements of a novel: characters, storyline, and environment description. Light novels do not require description of the environment, and having it is the icing on the cake. But there must be at least two out of three. Just one storyline is so fascinating that it's almost meaningless. I would also recommend polishing the outline of your first article and adding some difficulties (water point description). After all, it's been a long time since I've read a complete story so heartily. The last time I read a story like this was in a magazine. Much love❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

The author's theme and creativity are very well integrated, without suppressing the protagonist and Goldfinger, and the combat power aspect is very good and very rigorous. Moreover, most authors cannot portray the kind of growth of the protagonist. The protagonists written by other authors are either diaosi or a licker. This protagonist is not influenced by women or is a licker, which is very good. Moreover, the author likes the writing speed very much. This is the real cool writing, without any delay or watering down. Rather than a brainless cool article. It's a pity that this book has too few words, so I didn't read enough. And there are too few such books. If other books had this quality, they would all be great authors.

To put it simply, it is very imaginative, and the protagonist also has his own principles. It is very refreshing to do things neatly and neatly. However, the content is too concise, so that many times it feels no better than a detailed outline. In terms of psychological description, there are also some other foils to describe it a little, so that maybe it can better mobilize emotions?

The setting is good, but the writing is similar to the outline. No, buddy, you are a novel, not an outline. How can you write more novels like this and feel comfortable?

The writing is very good, but none of your novels are long.

Yes, it is much better than those who have Eternal Kaleidoscope and are still playing tricks with Konoha F4.

A magical book, the plot is not procrastinating, it is crisp and clear, and the logic is self-consistent. If you have invincible strength, you will never play house with others. It's just that the plot could be expanded and written a little bit, and everyone enjoyed watching it.

No book can be as long as it is written. If it is written in detail, or if it is written in a subtle way, it can become a masterpiece. It's coming to an end again, and I've written one book after another, but it's still this outline flow, and I guess it will never become popular.

Okay, okay, good idea