The System Defines Itself from the Start, and This System Is an Idiot

The author's book is okay, but I can't stand it when someone else forces me to make a choice, especially when it comes to offspring and partners.

The book is very good and novel. The main plot is human relations and profit transactions. The age and knowledge of the protagonist are not as good as those of the aborigines. It makes me feel normal and not forced. It is very good. No, the protagonist gains everything and then loses everything. It makes no sense to me. There is no chance that there are bugs on him, and I don't say it. For me, it's too new and I can't watch it anymore.

The character creation is quite perfect, whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, but the pace is too fast, some things could have been written a lot and just passed by, and the transition in the middle is too blunt, as if... The author has no outline. If it is written like this without an outline, it can be said that the author is quite good, the counter-routine is also in place, and the plot is more attractive. People, but with an outline, it is not very good. As mentioned above, the characters are perfectly created but the pace is too fast and the transitions are too rigid. This brings a natural sense of dissonance, as if you are reading not a novel but an episode of commentary. Of course it is not bad. Generally speaking, the ideas are quite good, but the too fast pace brings a rough and tumble with almost no modifications and no details. It has a rough and grainy feel and is quite fragmented and incoherent. At the same time, it gives people the feeling that the author wrote whatever he thought of. The plot is quite attractive, but the cg that goes through the plot is stiff and laggy. At the same time, it may be due to the setting or some other reason. Although the author's explanation is acceptable, there is always a sense of gap and contradiction before and after, and it is not smooth. It is smooth and gives people a sense of stalemate. It does not mean that there cannot be changes in the world view, but it is too fast. Too fast changes or additions do not bring a sense of vastness and enrichment of the world view, but a sense of inconsistency and indescribable hedging. However, overall it is still a good book, with no hidden flaws and good quality. Therefore, I give a four-star rating. Character★★★★★ Details ★★☆☆☆ Transition★★★☆☆ Plot ★★★★☆ Senses★★★★☆ Overall: 3.6 Points Rounding: 4.0 Points

The imagination and logic are great. Who said that the world of cultivating immortals has to be ancient and ancient? The writing style is also good for such articles. However, after becoming a saint, I went back too hastily. There is a feeling that the author wrote too fast, so I can only restart and re-control the progress.

It's a really good book, it's logical, the combat power doesn't collapse, and there are no brainless NPCs. The author should develop at a certain point and it should be popular. Only brainless books can become popular.

All I can say is that it's outrageous. It's outrageous. There are too many settings and it can be said that there is almost no story.

It's well written and will be finished after 66 chapters.

Rationality without losing aesthetics, it is not that good and evil are indifferent, only the true heart lasts forever, but it still lacks a little experience, but such a protagonist is really good, at least much better than the protagonists of those cool essays or other essays. A person's most ordinary mentality can form this protagonist. Everyone is a protagonist, and everyone has the idea of ​​changing their fate against the will of heaven, but this protagonist makes me see an ordinary person

Between good-looking and ugly (not in a derogatory sense), if you think it looks good, it means you have seen certain points, and if you think it does not look good, it means you have seen certain points but rejected it. The world view of capital cultivating immortality is clearly revealed, and it seems to have a sense of magical reality. I haven't read such a magical book for a long time, so I give it a 5 out of selfishness.

Five stars! Five stars! Sooner or later I will die laughing in this novel, but I am still filled with emotion! It's been a long time since I met Long Aotianwen who was so agreeable to me. The main body is Long Aotian's invincible and refreshing articles, but in polishing the details, the author has obviously taken into account the current market situation and made adjustments to cater to it. Personally speaking, this wave of adjustments has won my heart. Come on, brother!