The Sect’s Eldest Senior Sister Is My Betrothed

It's quite good, but one star was deducted because the relationship between the two heroines has not progressed at all. Shen Ruli's role is not as much as that of Ning Xin. Those who don't know better think that Ning and Su are the heroines and are driving the plot.

I think this setting is more normal. There is not so much love at first sight, especially for two girls. The first impression is that they are sisters. Isn't it normal?

It's very interesting (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎), but Shen's plot is too little, and Ning's plot is too much. Those who don't know think Ning is the protagonist, and those who know Shen is the protagonist think that the protagonist will be changed. So I deducted one star here. I hope it will be greatly improved and the plot of Shen and the emotional drama between Su and Shen will be greatly improved. I hope you can work harder and we are still waiting for a big production.

I have read many books and would like to express my personal opinion. This book is not particularly good. First, the plot in the early stage (around Chapters 1-60) is a bit broken, and the logic is a bit confusing. Then there are some typos and grammatical errors that have not been corrected. Then there is too little plot about senior sister Shen Ruli, and the emotional line between the two heroines is not very good. Second, the plot in the middle period is okay, Shen appears more, and then there are more emotional lines. Third, the later plot is really a bit unsatisfactory, and the plot is a bit too rushed (maybe the author The author is busy finishing it, and if it develops normally, I can probably write 100 more chapters later); and then there are about 20 chapters at the end, which is really unfinished. It is obvious that the happy life of a family of three is over, and there must be a separate plot later to pave the way for the next 15 chapters. I personally think it is completely unnecessary, because I am a bit disgusted with this setting. It is very annoying to have to turn a happy ending into a drama of finding a family. Finally, I hope that the author can try his best to create better works

I've finished watching it. It's a good read, but the ending is so rushed. Will Ruanruan do a spin-off? It's better to publish a new book about Ruanruan [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] I thought the Fox Emperor and the Dragon Princess would become Taoist lovers in the end, but it's a pity that I didn't write the rest of it [laughing] But I'm fine with the details. When I clicked on the author's homepage, I discovered that in the past, I had recommended bookshelf for books I saw that I liked. The amazing thing is that I had finished reading three of the author's books without even realizing it! The fourth book has been opened. I paid attention to it first and found it quite interesting. I just need more extras from this one, I haven't seen enough [laughing]

Hey, I want to see the follow-up of Su Ran and her two mothers. The two mothers became gods after Ruanruan disappeared, and then they kept looking for Ruanruan. Su Mo and his wife must have had adventures, and Tianji also mentioned that they will meet Ruanruan again in the future. I hope the author will write a sequel as soon as possible. You have to fill in the holes you buried! This is very inferior. If you don't write it, it would be unreasonable. [Turn your lips]

It's good-looking, but I haven't seen it for a long time, Senior Sister.

I can probably guess why the rating is so low. I think it's because the ancestor has always emphasized revenge, and has a particularly bad attitude towards the protagonist.

The whole story is pretty good, but the Su Ruanuan chapter at the end is a bit exaggerated. A 5 or 6-year-old child feels like he has grown up in an instant, and has matured mentally. He led a bunch of monsters to play in the Dragon Palace, and then turned into a little adult in the next moment, which felt quite sudden.

How should I put it? There was so little about Shen in the previous chapters that I now wonder if I'm reading a story with two female protagonists [smile]