The Male Lead's White Moonlight? I'll Take Her

The writing is very good. The overall plot is okay. The title of the book is also interesting. Except for the first few chapters, which are a little unclear. It is the first time I write a novel and it is very powerful. It is still relatively novel. If it is better, maybe it can be a small hit. If it becomes popular, I can be proud to say that I am a relative or friend of Da. It's great to be a novel author for the first time. Better if you dare to break it It's even worse. Kakaka. On behalf of many readers, I will bombard you on V. If you think the book is good, please give it a good review. This is written by him. Book Power: He was very happy when he saw it and kept sending it to us 😳

It's really good to watch, but the emotional line doesn't take up most of the place. If you really want to say it, two-thirds of the plot and one-third of the emotional line. I really like the stubbornness and decisiveness of the heroine, and it's very exciting! The heroine will not give in to others just because she is better than them. She will also use her dirty tricks to make wodmire really hot in Thai pants.

I haven't finished it yet, but halfway through, I feel more and more that the heroine looks like a villain. Including the massacre of the city, I can't accept the three views. Compared with Li Qingluan's light of righteousness, I can't accept the personality of Su Zhi. In fact, there are better and gentler methods. It can be understood that it is similar to "killing to stop killing". Means, but again, I can't accept it. I have read more than a hundred chapters. Earlier, Su Zhi said that the Bodhisattva and other cults treated ordinary people and casual cultivators as pigs and dogs, but in fact, when Su Zhi massacred the city, he did not treat them as human beings. In fact, this article was published first, so I blindly guessed whether the author had just switched from male videos or for some other reason. In the second book, Li Qingluan, many details were actually handled very well, and the plot lines and characters did not collapse. They were all very good. Therefore, this article was very uncomfortable to read. I skipped directly to the finale and couldn't even wait for the plot of the two heroines to be together. Now that things have come to this, alas, I feel uncomfortable, so I'm going to work on a new book. In addition, I would like to recommend another book by the author, the heroine Li Qingluan and the eldest lady. The writing, plot and detail treatment are all obvious, and the author's progress can be seen clearly.

If you like it, it's well written. If you're not a book reader, you can check it out. All the highlights are in the introduction. There aren't many emotional lines at the moment. If you want to see some ambiguity, you can wait and see. The heroine doesn't fight much alone. Some people may think that the heroine's progress is slow. Also, this book is not recommended for the Holy Virgin. The female protagonist can be considered a half-villain. She massacres cities and kills people. Some people may not be able to accept it and scream randomly. The female protagonist is also a missionary leader and brainwashed. So far, the impression is pretty good. Other than that, there aren't too many problems.

Ahem, shamelessly give yourself a five-star rating If you have any questions, you can ask them and the author will try to improve them.

I was very interested when I first saw the title of the book. It is the first time I read an article with this theme. The first few chapters are about laying out the background, which is relatively slow. But later on, the plot develops quickly, the characters are vivid, there are reversals and some complaints, hahahaha, and the author updates very quickly. I hope you can read more and find different surprises.

It's been a long time since I've seen an article that's so consistent with my feelings. I've read so much without realizing it. I hope the author can keep up the good work and never end it. 😢 The subject matter and narrative are very novel. The protagonist also has clear love and hate and is decisive in killing and especially has a sense of the overall situation. Don't stop updating. Author, if you are tired, please write more articles [laughing] 😫 By the way, if the author finishes the work, will he consider publishing a physical book? 🤔

I really like Su Zhi's character. This book is very well written. Most of the main logic of the story is online. It's not too cliche. It's my favorite type. The author will update it soon. I'm optimistic about you~ 🙂

It's okay. The protagonist is not a conventional good person, but he has his own goals and bottom line. The plot is not too slow, but the emotional line is a bit strange. Please give the author a big boost 😘😘

I think this subject matter is quite interesting to me. I think the transition needs to be optimized. I read it a bit too fast at first and didn't understand the transformation of a magic weapon into a divine weapon. The heroine suddenly transformed into an egg and became Nirvana and was reborn. I was still wondering if the heroine had experienced life and death and was suddenly reborn. So I went to watch it again and found out that it was a deal with the way of heaven, but because there was no writing about the heroine The pain of being pulled out by cramps directly turned into an egg. I directly omitted this part, which caused me to experience life and death without understanding. I personally feel that the writing in this part is not very clear. The optimization of the transition will make it more comfortable to read, and there will be no omissions when reading too fast. In short, I still like the author's writing, and I hope the author's writing will get better and better.