Book 1 by Ye Yu Sheng Gu

Author, let me explain in detail, and listen to my words. There should be less theater brackets, etc., Which can easily affect the perception. But this is not to say that the book is not good, but to say that it can be better! I have seen the sincerity of the author himself. At present, it is better than other peers. The character creation is good, and the protagonist's personality is not explosive. However, some improvements must be made and the currency must be clarified. Even if you are called a bad character, don't waver. Only by writing these two points can the story be more real, stand out, and always be ahead of the peers. I hope you can encourage me more! Don't give up on this book! Keep at it, flowers will bloom and butterflies will come!

I'm narcissistic, I give myself full marks

The north wind is weak, the thundering geese are calling the snow and the moon is cold. The sound of people drumming, the shadow of cold swords, and the sound of sound in the sky. Being entangled in fate, I will never swim. Now we are starting from scratch. Cross over from the beginning, The sword shines brightly, Traveling in search of hometown. You must persevere in the reverse flow of the river [crying], you are more interesting when it comes to Gu fandoms, other fandoms become pure and cool when they are written.

It's so beautiful [Sending my heart] If you keep writing like this, it will definitely be a masterpiece. The author's writing style, characters, etc. Are all excellent [Sending my heart] It's worth reading [Sending my heart]

Rate the following points … Beautiful Just too little

How can you sleep at your age? I'm going to update a hundred and eighty chapters in one day. How dare you sleep? [Smile]

Come on, duck, but be careful of the Ten-turn Net Gu hahaha [almost crying]

When the eagle is still young, the ink is like a dragon and a snake flying on the paper!

The most detailed Gu world novel I have ever seen.

Haobao, you are so cute