The First Book of the Talent at Work

There is a big problem with the setting. The story takes place three thousand years later, when the model worker has definitely swallowed the Gu world. Otherwise, the Supreme Immortal Fetus Gu will starve to death. To eradicate this shortcoming, the model worker must break through the tenth revolution. In any case, the Gu world should be gone. And you wrote about the Great Love Immortal, so the other ones should have been fed the Supreme Immortal Aperture. The protagonist should live in the Supreme Immortal Aperture, so you shouldn't be born as a second-class person. Instead, they should be first-class twins with the flesh-and-blood reunion Gu. Moreover, after three thousand years, the ice in Qingmao Mountain has not yet melted? 🤦Return to Ice Spear Mountain. You say thirty years is fine. Three thousand. According to you, the ancient Beiming Ice Soul Body can completely seal the entire Gu world in ice.

The content is still very good, but the writing of Ren Zu Zhuan is a bit awkward, so the content could be reduced appropriately. Also, you should play less jokes and correct typos.

This protagonist doesn't know the birth point of the Supreme Immortal Aperture.

Bored to death

It's very interesting, but it doesn't feel like I'm reading a dark novel.

I feel that more schools should be added. After all, 3000 years have passed, and there are many talents in the Gu world. There must be some who create new schools, such as alchemy and the like.

Very beautiful

It's very bland. The popularity of Shengxian later will probably depend on his reputation.

A dream that lasts for thousands of years, what year is it today?

Still good