Transmigrate Into a Book and Cultivate Immortality: My Junior Brother Keeps Trying to Break My Heartless Dao

I have read Chapter 12 so far and I really like it. 8.15 After reading Chapter 24, briefly describe my feelings. Screen jumps and plot jumps are very fast, and sometimes there is no connection. The plot is confusing and it is easy to lose track of the rhythm. Many times I have to stop and think about it. The plot jumps really fast, and sometimes I feel like I don't understand it. Now I am still in a daze. Ten years have passed inexplicably, and then I lost my vest and performed various operations. Lin Jing became a Nascent Soul in the blink of an eye. Although I can't see it clearly, I somehow feel that the plot is very interesting and interesting (I like the details, hahaha, I have written and read it in a few sentences in nine years, and the writing/reading is messy, and many operations and plots are not explained, but I still click on it, hahaha). 8.16 I've read Chapter 94. The plot line is confusing, but it doesn't affect my cp. I'm still looking forward to it... It's just that my wife's writing is a bit confusing, but the characters are still very interesting. And why are there so few readers for this book and no ratings at all. This book is really interesting, but it would be nice if the plot wasn't so confusing. The pace is really super fast, so fast that you don't care about people's lives or lives. The most basic world view, character backgrounds, formation disks, and secret method settings are not mentioned or introduced. It is just a story without any transition [face covering] It's a pity. If the author could write the plot line more clearly, I can't imagine how good it would be!!! After all, the character is really touching and the story is interesting. 8.17 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that I really hope my wife can write the plot line more clearly and add some worldview information! Really, the plot line is so fast that it doesn't care about people's life and death, the pace seems to be at double speed [crying] Maybe this is my wife's unique style now [crying] I really like this couple, but it's really too confusing [crying] 8.21 Deduct one star. What to say next? Five stars is too reluctant.

This book is really good! Lin Jing - Shen Yu, Ying Qingfeng - Feng Ming, Lin Zai - Mo Yaojia, Xie Lianqing - Murong Conghui, Luo Yan - Li Wei... I hope you will live happily forever. Walking through the wind and rain, I am moved to see you sharing weal and woe and never abandoning me. As fate dictates, I see you getting married and happily married. I wish you happiness forever. In addition, I hope that Li Wanning, Zhou Ziying, Lian Mingcheng, Xiang Fengcheng, Ouyang Xiu, Lu Jiaoluan, Ruan Qing, Lin Shuo, Zhi Yan, Ling Wei, Ling Mo... You can always live peacefully, happily and happily. I hope there will be no pain or separation in your lives. In short... Be brave and do what you want to do! ₍˄·͈༝^·͈*₎◞ ̑̑

It's very nice [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] I just feel a little bit uncomfortable with Lin Zai. He is such a gentle and bright person, and has brought such a big transformation to the world of immortality. It's a pity [crying] but overall it is still a sweet article [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

I still like the plot, but the pace of this book is really fast, just like the first sentence where the protagonist is still taking a leisurely walk, and the next sentence tells you that the protagonist has finished killing everyone and has a good chance. I was confused while watching it, and I really wish the plot could be written in more detail. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

The plot has twists and turns without dragging, and is fast-paced, while the emotions are slow and deep in comparison. This book is quite comfortable to read, and I like the writing style in many places. When Lin Jing was in coma for a year, I really felt sorry for Yuyu [almost crying] It's like he died and he lived like him The setting is quite novel and beautiful.

It's very, very good-looking, but I don't know why the ratings are so low. Some unsightly books have high ratings, and the comments section is full of scoldings. As a result, the ratings are higher than the last🤣On the other hand, good-looking books have no popularity, and the ratings of books are particularly low.

Nice! ! ! The plot and the emotional line are well integrated, it's a porridge [heartfelt]

Laughing to death Surprise! Shen Yu is actually the one whose body was taken away Explosion! What is the relationship between Lin Jing and Lin Cheng, and whether they have any unclear relationship with their subordinate Lian Mingcheng, which has caused such misunderstandings from others.

It's time for an update [smile][smile] Don't force me to climb your pipes

It's good to watch, but I'm a bit confused and confused at times. I don't know what to say.