Honkai: Star Rail: I’m a Sword Hoarder, Not Mara-Struck

The settings and supporting characters are written in great detail, After reading Chapter 33, I was so angry that I temporarily put down my fattening. The protagonist was still too gentle. He was very angry when he was treated "for your own good", but he calmed down immediately, leaving me as an emotionally unstable reader because the first half was substituted and the second half was stuck [face covering]

It's good-looking, and the descriptions are quite detailed, but there are too few. Another timeline is too long. Not to mention the main plot, Wuxiao on the Cloud alone has thousands of years. I estimate that it will take a hundred chapters to cover the incident in Cangcheng. If you want to read the main plot immediately, you should consider it. However, I personally recommend this book. The writing is pretty good, but it's not suitable for writing fan fiction.

Advantages: The writing is very good, and the descriptions are very familiar. It can be seen that the author has definitely put effort into imagining and describing the scenes. The chivalry is very strong, and sometimes it makes my blood boil. I wish I could find someone to fight like the protagonist. I believe that the author also has his own understanding of the spirit and honor of warriors. It can be seen that he has put a lot of effort into his thinking. There is also the intertwining of interpersonal relationships, which is complex and deep. Coupled with the setting of Jianwang San and the background of Xianzhou in the past, it seems to have a strange rationality. It is not tearing, but full of fun. Disadvantages: The timeline is not very clear and is not suitable for readers who do not have a deep understanding of timelines. Although it is said that everyone has shortcomings, the descriptions are a bit too strong and the explanations are sometimes not clear. Maybe it is a problem with writing skills or forgetting after writing? There are also people's names that appear inexplicably. Although they play a role in advancing the plot, the brain used to deal with the timeline and plot has to remember the names, which is undoubtedly a burden when reading. I personally think that the biggest problem is the appearance of too many names or branch lines that will not appear again. I think it hinders reading a bit, and the size and text become redundant... I am not a professional, but I just think there may be something wrong, and I suggest avoiding it. In short, this is the first time I write a long review. Overall, it is a very good book. I give it four stars... In fact, I would give it four and a half stars if I could.

The writing is exquisite, the characters are described in detail, as well as detailed research and detailed explanations of each setting! Although this is a joint article between Jian Wang III and Xingtie, it doesn't matter if you haven't read Jian Wang III! 👍🏻Because I haven't watched it at all ( And the male protagonist has no cp and no cp! By the way, the current timeline is before Di Gong Siming became the Star God. For the sake of my long review, why don't you update it😖~ There are very few texts with this kind of biased plot, so don't pay attention to what those people say! Well, madam, I just want to ask a little, and I definitely don't mean to offend. It may be that I am mistaken, or I am actually hallucinating. In any case, I hope that we can adhere to the principle of friendly and rational relationship, and do not hurt our friendship because of some possible misunderstandings. Finally, I have absolutely no intention of offending. I am just asking in the spirit of great exploration into the nature of the universe and the spirit of seeking truth and pragmatism: "Can I marry you?" 🥺👉🌹💍👈

The author's writing style is really great. I really like the author's description of the scenery. It is very comfortable and allows people to draw pictures in front of their eyes. Moreover, the settings of various characters are very complete and three-dimensional, without the frivolous feeling of using a template. However, the author describes the details too much, which can be understood as being rigorous about foreshadowing and logic. However, for readers, it will be tiring for the senses after reading for a long time. There is a sense of déjà vu and some plots are too jumpy (this is especially obvious when listening to books). It is also possible that the author is not suitable for writing fan fiction. It would be more harmonious if it is an imaginary world.

It's good to watch, but I came here for Beng Tie, but Beng Tie has not been mentioned in this book yet (it is Beng Tie, and now the plot seems to be the main character, etc.), Which makes me a little disappointed. However, the copywriter also said that there are many private settings and the writing style is quite good, which is acceptable. Um, some mentioned that the protagonist's guardian does not allow the protagonist to skip a grade. Is this storyline unsatisfactory? However, if you introduce the guardian's background story and perspective a little bit, this behavior is quite reasonable. If you are interested, you can take a look first, don't just listen to the comments section, and then decide whether to abandon it or not. After all, I personally really think this plot is nothing ( It varies from person to person

Emmm, how should I put it? The writing is good, but there are too many original parts by the author, resulting in too many characters. Their appearance time is almost the same, and I can't remember it. There is also an uncomfortable plot where the protagonist wants to skip a grade, but the sister won't let the protagonist skip. However, since the protagonist is Shota [smile], add one star

The writing is very good, and the descriptions of both scenes and characters are very delicate. Although it is too detailed, some places seem a bit slow and the perspective is unclear. For example, the scenes and psychological descriptions from the perspectives of all parties in the banquet are too detailed and detailed, which made me unable to react to the switching of some characters' perspective while reading. The description of the emotional tendency of each person's perspective is a bit too consistent, which dilutes the tension caused by the banquet. The plot is also a bit too fast in the early stages, and the emotional transitions are a bit blurry. However, the faults do not hide the merits. This article is a rare masterpiece since I have read Tomato fandoms for so long. It makes me feel like I have gone back to the time when the online gods were fighting. Big boost for the author! ! ! [Like] ps: If you like fast pace and listening to books, you can skip it. This book is obviously a slow-burning novel. There are too few official settings about this period. The author will definitely have many personal settings and new characters in order to write the article. If you can't accept it, you can skip it. But if you have requirements for writing and can accept slow-burning novels, you can give it a try.

Super pretty! I have always preferred to read fan fiction, but most of the novels are limited to the official plots. After reading them for a long time, they will feel the same and a bit boring. The author is very powerful. Through his interpretation of the text in the game and his own knowledge, he has replenished the world view of the novel, making it grand and interesting. The settings and personality traits of each character are very attractive. The story plot in the article is also very fascinating. I really like to read drama-oriented novels, but some people may find them a bit boring. But the author writes really well! I hope the author can continue to persevere, and I will continue to pursue it! [Sending Hearts]

The score is very low, please support it with five stars~ I've read about a quarter of it so far, so I'll comment here first: Your writing style is really good, but I wish you could leave some blank space. Being too detailed would destroy other people's imagination and make it less beautiful. The most controversial part is the period when the protagonist goes to school. I understand that I want to shape everyone to have bad things but to be generally good, but I tried too hard and felt that everyone was poisonous... The protagonist is a person with brains and strength, but people around him treat him as a child and make his own decisions. I would like to mention a few points here: First, as an adult who has lived two lives, the protagonist finds a sense of belonging in a different world. It is a good thing, but he should not accept all emotions that are obviously calculated. It feels like the protagonist is somewhat disconnected here, giving the impression of an adult's IQ, a child's character, and superhuman abilities. Secondly, I should consider the mood of the readers. Most people hate having their parents make decisions. The writing is too real and makes people uncomfortable🤢. After all, I came here to seek reflection and comfort, not to repeat what I experienced back then and remain unchanged. Third, pay attention to the character issue. It is clearly written in the front that Sister Shuijian has no desire to control, but from the back, she and Aunt Yun clearly arranged the protagonist, and it is obvious that she has a strong desire to control. I sincerely hope that you can make some changes here. I feel that many people have abandoned books here... I will try my best to make a fair evaluation, and I also ask all book friends to be merciful (be careful) [awkward smile] [smile]