The Deadly Game: A Rendezvous with the Devil

It's really good-looking, the emotional lines are very delicate, and the plot is full of imagination. There are many places where you can see it. The author is also very careful in depicting a new world view in different scripts. It cannot be said that every character is very real, but the main characters all have a "human" feel. The disadvantage is that some monster information is not well hidden. As a result, when I read the monster encyclopedia later, I would not feel a sense of loss and lacked a bit of fun. Just like in the second script, the protagonist killed some Sulley monster and double the number of Sulley monsters appeared. After several encounters with the Sulley monster, he failed to kill him and escaped from the range of the Sulley monster, and double the number of monsters appeared. Later, when he saw the monster encyclopedia, he already knew what was going to happen and completely guessed the information about the Sulley monster. It's also about the Heart-Drawing Ghost that it exceeded my expectations and I'm a little happy (●°u°●). Later on, the pace of the protagonist became faster and a bit overwhelming. It made me feel like I was in a dream. The changes were a bit too fast. To sum up, the writing is very good^ω^, but it needs to be improved. I look forward to the author's progress. Just like the author said that he is a medical student, I am also a medical student. I hope to learn more about the description of the human body and learn more from my predecessors. ∠( ᐛ ∠)＿

1. There is a lot of original content in the dungeon, which shows the author's intentions, but the writing style is rather complex. It is recommended that each dungeon have one of the three themes of upgrading flow/horror and supernatural/wits reasoning. For similar infinite flow cool articles, you can refer to "Doomsday Paradise", "Thriller Paradise", "Colorful" "Egg Game". For group portraits, you can refer to "Earth Redemption", "Midnight Owl" and "Earth Online". For horror, you can refer to "The Scary Joke" series "Identity Number 019", "Hell App", "Mysterious Earth Sea" and "I Become a God in a Thriller Game (First Half)" 2. The monster illustration setting is rare, but it is not recommended to have it in every copy, because it is okay to see this setting once or twice, but it feels a bit lazy after seeing it too much, like patching the settings/holes that have not been shown. You can try to learn original/new original mystery novels, so that the protagonist and the player get the same amount of information, increase the complexity and rationality of the rules, and work hard on the sophistication of the copy. If you write a well-written story, each copy will be like a short mystery novel. Of course, the Monster Manual is still very fun and can be kept, but it would be better to weaken it appropriately. 3. I like the character design of the protagonist, ordinary hanging silk, and occasionally have a flash of inspiration. I hope to retain the good parts of the protagonist's humanity until the finale! There could be less of the part about being obsessed with beautiful women, because there are too many of the same kind and it is no longer popular. Even the wording lowers the B-level of the article, and the look and feel is very old-fashioned. Appropriate selling fu, lily or even four loves will make the article more popular and interesting. If you want to write more novel content, you can try adding trace amounts of meta or radio wave elements. 4. The author's writing style is excellent compared with other authors of the same type. The writing is plain and smooth, with an occasional hint of humor, and appropriate jokes. There are no exaggerated writing methods and secondary settings. The plot connection is smooth and natural, making it easy to read. Moreover, the dungeon world/prop settings are very concise, and the characteristics of the characters are easy to remember. I hope the author can increase the enjoyment by appropriately adding some highlight moments of the characters, rather than by obtaining various props, which will be more enjoyable. 5. There are too many typos. It is recommended to rework and modify the entire text when you have time, as well as some grammatical errors, which will greatly affect the perception. Five stars for encouragement, I hope to see the update of the unfolding of the raging waves in the future, write the finale, and become the gold mine in Tomato History! It is also recommended to refer to "Fraud Game" to join the battle of wits between players and become a masterpiece. It only needs to evolve from simple cliques. I am good and you are bad.

It is a very good novel. The author has his own ideas and will not be interfered by the outside world. However, the current environment cannot help it. All walks of life seem to have entered a bottleneck. Luck is really important, but you will be handsome if you persevere. Come on! You must keep your promise to finish after 1000 chapters!

The plot is a bit slow, but it's still very good. There are some dungeons where the ending is a bit hasty. I say I don't want to write too long, but I feel that if a good copy is long and complete, there will be no problem. The overall content and plot are okay.

This book is a treasure book that has not yet been discovered. I believe it will become popular in the future. Unlike the stories on the market, they are all stories that have not been read before and are not brainless. It's very good to have a clue and clear thinking. I hope the author can keep writing in this state and don't be discouraged. Gold will always shine.

I really like the author's writing style, it's very interesting, I can't stop laughing, and the plot design is very novel, but the author always doubts himself, I hope you don't get discouraged, there are still many people who like you

It satisfies the requirements, and it's not bad. The characters are quite funny, and the plot is not bad. It suits my taste. I prefer this type, where the protagonist fights wits and courage with others. It's not bad.

To be honest, these copies are relatively new, better than those old routines, but the author thinks they are a bit wordy, and they are okay. I feel that after reading a lot of novels, I like to read more novel ones, and I am tired of the old routines.

I've read 100 chapters, and the copy is so good that I wanted to stay up late at night. It is indeed a human-written AI. Nowadays, all AIs are the same, almost the same. Right now it's 5 stars, it's quite nice, I'll talk about it later.

The plot of the dungeon where the protagonist lives is very novel. Although the writing style is not particularly good, I think this book is still very well written. I can read it and read it. I hope the author will not give up and continue to work hard.