Multiplayer Survival Game: One Missing Player Could Mean Defeat

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The premise is good; I've read ten chapters so far and it seems very readable. I'll see how well the later developments handle the death logic, the interaction between reality and the game, and the interpersonal relationships between teammates. Keep it up, author!

A few issues arise. Since the game isn't mandatory, there shouldn't be so many people if they know people will die. With so many people, there should be supernatural forces and official organizations in the real world. Since the monsters are unkillable, and the game allows for the realization of ideas, shouldn't there be a way to deal with some resurrected monsters?

I feel like the low-star rating is mainly due to the first dungeon. There were no quest clues or monster descriptions. Adding descriptions after everyone had finished the dungeon and left felt a bit late. Providing vague kill or avoidance hints within the dungeon would have been better, rather than having everyone die. It would have been better to have some players intentionally sabotage the dungeon for high scores. There are countless ways to clear the dungeon, but nothing good comes of it.

It's a very imaginative and enjoyable story. The only downside is the forced avoidance of a harem, which is really unnecessary. Forcing a single female lead amidst a group of women is pointless; we want a harem, more sweet interactions within it! The pacing is a bit too fast; the male lead hasn't even become a demigod yet, and an evil god has already appeared in reality.

The characters are vividly portrayed, as if you're talking to real people. The plot is unpredictable, requiring you to read slowly to find the ending, which draws you into the story. It's highly immersive and I recommend checking it out.

The plot is original, and the author has very original ideas, avoiding the clichés of other books. It's definitely worth reading. I finished the book in a few days, and the ending was quite unexpected with its stark contrast. The only regret is that Lu Qing's character is only briefly mentioned later. Overall, it's a very good read! Highly recommended!!

This is the best book I've ever read. Author, could you create a fan group?

It's well-written, keep it up! There's a problem with the introduction, revise it and it might go viral.

It's pretty good, except the main character is a bit dim-witted and relies on luck. The plot is excellent.