Damn! Is This a Short Drama or Footage of a Murder?

The author's writing is still good, but this is not the reason why I gave it five stars. The reason why I rated it and gave it five stars is because the author stayed up most of the night and liked my comments at three or four in the morning.

Thank you all foster parents for urging me to update, adding bookshelves, generating electricity with love and five-star praise [shy][shy][shy]!

Except for the frequent dirty jokes, this book is very good, with a fast pace, a clear story, and a suitable portrayal of the protagonist. The most satisfying thing is that the character development of the single heroine is also good, there is no bloody plot, and the appearance of the heroine did not make the book collapse. (Is it possible that dirty jokes are a tomato specialty? If you don't write them, will you be banned from the book? But it's okay, at least it's not that the girlfriend cheated and dumped the male protagonist before the beginning, and then all the female characters were hunched forward and backward, with a charming smile hanging from the corners of their mouths. It doesn't matter, I choose to be content with what I have.) [Sending Hearts]

I would like to ask the author what do you think of this novel? [Awkward laugh] I can't bear to give a low score [Huge face] In the words of this novel: "There are so many places to complain about, I don't know where to start." [Laughing and crying] I saw the live broadcast, the male protagonist said that there is a 50% chance that the opponent will guess correctly, but later it became a choice of one out of ten... There are many poisonous points like this. I hope the author's future works will be better. The content is quite good. I'll run away first, I'm not Shennong [laughing]

Punishment! Is this a short play or a murder video? Stray cat The plot is quite interesting, there are many similar themes, and the writing has a different feel, at least it's not so cliche. The image of the characters is also much better than that of a novice novel. Although it is inevitable that there will always be a policewoman and the like, the writing is more detailed and a bit artistically exaggerated, but it is also relatively three-dimensional. Four to five stars, new book seedlings, rounded up.

I read a few chapters and read the comments, but no one could tell me why the book was good. I have a question. If the school announces expulsion, will the school not bear any consequences? No compensation? The protagonist doesn't take it seriously either? Some people in the comments said that the police's IQ is online. IQ online can tell how you kill people. Your video exposed you killing people (that's not the original statement, but this is the meaning)

I really like the timeline chart. It's often a little confusing when reading novels. It would be much better to have a picture to help sort it out. Like~ It might be better if it is divided into a little more detail? (The above is my personal opinion~)

After the author commented and liked it, I read more and got better again. It's better to re-write a review to support the new book. The previous part is about a small reversal of the slap in the face and the attitude of the protagonist. It seems wrong. The protagonist can ignore it, but the author can ignore it if it is shown in the detailed description, because normal people will not care about anything after being aggrieved. Since the reversal is written, it should have the appearance of a reversal. There is no sense of revocation, so For normal logic, no one will pay attention to this. If the protagonist does not get fame or fortune after being wronged, as a reader, I will not feel comfortable watching it anyway, because this is the route chosen by the author, but there are some details later. At least many passerby NPCs will know about it, and it will feel much better.

Author, please listen to me. Your novel is not decorated with gorgeous language, but touches readers with its ordinary true feelings. The sentences are fluent and coherent, and the psychological portrayal and detailed description are perfect, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials is very novel, the angles are clearly visible, and the language is plain yet elegant. It is concise and full of meaning, and it can be called a model article! This novel shows extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. The psychological description of the hero and heroine is described to the extreme in plain sentences, reaching a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view, this novel still needs improvement, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. After reading your novel, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time. How could there be such a penetrating novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." After reading the novel, I dare not comment easily, I am afraid that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still commented, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful novel, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, they cannot describe the wonderfulness of this novel. So at the end, I just want to say: Your novel is really wonderful, why not update ten more chapters [laughing evilly] I copied it

Hmm... I think there is no need to bring the various skills arranged by the male protagonist to a super level. For example, if you max out the forensic skills, wouldn't that be a disguised form of undermining the role of the forensic Lolita? There is no need to be worth hundreds of billions, as this will make people feel that the male protagonist is separated from the people around him. The ordinary detective at the beginning is very good, the criminal investigation logic is first-rate, and there are other characters elsewhere that can complement each other. I think this is good.