Damn! Is This a Short Drama or Footage of a Murder?

The author's writing is decent, but that's not why I'm giving it five stars. The reason I gave it a rating and five stars is because the author was still up late at night, liking my comment at three or four in the morning.

Thank you all for your encouragement to update, for adding books to your bookshelves, for your love and support, and for the five-star reviews! 😳😳😳

Aside from the frequent bawdy jokes, this book is great. It's fast-paced, has a clear storyline, and the main characters are well-developed. What I like most is the female lead's well-developed personality; there aren't any melodramatic plot points, and her presence doesn't ruin the book. (Are bawdy jokes some kind of specialty of Tomato? Will the book be banned if I don't include them?

I'd like to ask the author what they think of their novel? 😅 I can't bear to give it a low score 🤦 To quote the novel itself: "There are so many things to complain about, I don't even know where to begin." 😂 I saw this part of the live stream, where the male lead initially said there was a 50% chance the other person would guess correctly, but later it became a 10-out-of-10 chance...

Punishment! Is this a short drama or a crime video? Stray cat The plot is quite interesting. There are many similar themes, but it's written with a different feel, at least it's not so formulaic. The characters are much better than those in light novels. Although there are always female police officers, they are written in more detail and have some artistic exaggeration, making them relatively three-dimensional. Four to five stars, a new book in its early stages, aiming for improvement.

I read a few chapters and looked at the comments, but not a single person mentioned why the book was good. I have a question: if someone is expelled from school by public notice, does the school really not take any responsibility? No compensation whatsoever? And the protagonist doesn't seem to care? Some comments even said the police were intelligent enough to explain how you killed someone, and that the video exposed your crime (that's not the exact wording, but the gist).

I absolutely love the timeline diagram! Reading novels can often get a bit confusing, and having a diagram helps to organize things much better. Thumbs up! Maybe it would be even better if it were divided into slightly smaller sections? (These are just my personal opinions.)

After liking and commenting on the author's post, I read more and things got better. I'll rewrite this review to support the new book. The beginning was about a minor plot twist and the protagonist's attitude, which seemed off. It's understandable that the protagonist could ignore it, but the author should have shown it in the details.

Author, please hear me out. Your novel, though devoid of ornate language, moves readers with its genuine, everyday emotions. The sentences flow smoothly and seamlessly, the psychological portrayal and detailed descriptions are perfect, leaving a lingering impression! From a literary perspective, the choice of subject matter is novel, the angle is clear, and the language is simple yet elegant.

Hmm... I think it's unnecessary to make the male lead's skills superhuman. For example, if you max out his forensic skills, isn't that just a way of reducing the screen time of the forensic pathologist girl? There's also no need to make him a billionaire; that makes the male lead feel disconnected from those around him.