Aotu World: Not the Princess, but the Thunder Emperor

My mother, it's really good-looking. It's one of the few non-Mary Sue and non-embarrassing novels in the novel. I especially like the emotional line between Lei Si and Gray. The cool brother and the cool sister are both faceless. Of course, Lei Si Dumei is also a very good, very good author. I want to kiss you hard. The writing is so good and the ending is also very satisfying. Everyone fills the gap well. I cry so hard that I am so happy. I will read this article and there will be pictures from time to time. It's really interesting [Blowing Kiss] It's so beautiful. And the school chapter is really good, so good, so good, ah, ah, ah, ah, I want to kiss you hard, hard, hard, my wife is so damn beautiful.

1. The plot is not a Mary Sue, 2. The protagonist of other stories is not related to everyone (referring to a bloody story before the competition or directly kicking the Golden Protagonist position to become the protagonist, or everyone is surrounding me and adding a moderate OOC) 3. The protagonist has an individual personality (not an abstract and familiar dream girl, nor quite a dream girl) 4. The emotional line is not strange [refers to falling in love suddenly or somewhat inexplicably (including family, friendship, love)] 5. It is not lighthearted Song Xiaotian's text (refers to making all the hatred, ideals, and feelings in the text Mary Su or daily) 6. The protagonist has his own goals 7. This is also my favorite point, the author really integrates the protagonist into the story 8. Comprehensive objective evaluation: high quality, personal evaluation: The author I love you [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

It's good to read, I love reading it, it's a good novel Character creation: The characterization of the heroine is overall satisfactory. At least it does not create some weird contrasts. She acts neatly and neatly, which makes people feel happy. Most of the other characters are not OOC, so there is no need to worry about ruining the original character. As for An Mixiu and Gray, who have a one-arrow love for the heroine, I personally think it is not unreasonable. At least they are quite delicate. There are some original characters. Plot setting: Smooth and smooth enough, as straightforward as the heroine, there are no obvious logical loopholes, and the emotions between the characters also make people feel fragrant and warm. The plot is well designed and progressive, very nice, but there are suspicions of laziness in certain settings. Plot trend: Before participating in the concave and convex competition, the diary was used to bury the knife for the future. If you are interested, you can pay more attention to it. The main line can be regarded as a relatively clear type. There are no daily segments. In most cases, it goes straight to the main line. In fact, the description of the battle at the end is not very good. This is why it is suspected of being lazy, but because it is considered logical in the setting, it is not a big problem. Summary: A very good novel, written by my wife very well! The pictures are also very beautiful! The emotions between the characters are very delicate and beautiful! I look forward to other works being as brilliant as today! [Praise]

Personally, I think this book is quite interesting, and the subject matter is very innovative. I don't know if it's because I've read too many convex fanfics or why? It feels like many books follow the same formula. But... The author is not like that! When I first saw Time Travel, I didn't want to watch it. Most people who travel through time follow the same routine, who knows? I just like this kind of sexy, sassy and powerful heroine, so I even draw my own pictures! How can I put it, the painting is in my heart, it's beautiful and beautiful! Anyway, I really like this kind of writing, why didn't I meet it earlier! Finally, I ask the author not to abandon the article

Finished with flowers. To be honest, I originally became interested in this book for three minutes, but I didn't expect that I would finish it on September 21st. Lei An is a super good little cake. Although she has the same cold temperament as Gray, there is no doubt about her beauty. This is the most perfect character creation I have ever seen in an embossed novel, and the author often draws some Xue An emoticons and beautiful pictures. Finally, let me say it again Lei An, you are just a fragrant and soft little cake, and you are the number one in my heart.

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This book is really the one I have read most clearly, and I think it is the best one. Most of the other fanfics in the concave and convex world are either completely separated from the original work, or the content is unclear, but this book is really good. The timeline is not confusing, the characters are well created, and the characters are not ruined. To be honest, compared with other books, this book is not only a little better, but it completely crushes other fanfics. This book is also the only one I have finished. I have a picky eye, and this book really suits my taste. Compared with other fan fiction that destroys characters and is outrageous, this book is really super awesome!

Lei Shi is definitely a character that many people have a deep understanding of in the concave and convex world. For me at least, he is fascinating. However, for such a long time, I seemed to have forgotten that he was not fearless. Farewell is something that each of us must experience in our lives. Even though it is still so far away from us, I still shed tears silently every time I think about it. Fear of separation, fear of separation, but people always have to leave. You will feel confused and at a loss, so what should you do? Fearless Slate ③ gave me the answer: hug her About fan fiction: My deepest feeling after reading so many is that good fan fiction, in addition to general characters and writing styles, more importantly, allows us to illuminate a ray of fire that illuminates ourselves.

It's very interesting. It's because of this book that I started reading Concave World and fan fiction. I think the score of this book is deliberately low. I love the image of the heroine very much. She is beautiful and sassy [admiring] and the plot is also very good. But I think I can keep it up for a while, it's a bit lacking, I've repainted it several times, but it's really nice. I hope the author will update soon [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing of Da Da is great, and it is very interesting. The life experience of Da Da is still unknown, and the subject matter is also novel. I am really looking forward to the subsequent plot. And I like Da Da very much. It is so handsome. The plot is coherent and interesting. I really like Da Da and Da Da's writing style [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Blow kiss]