Anime Crossover: Zero and I Share One Body

Recently I read someone's comments, and the author would like to explain here. This book is the author's first. I have read many books before, but when I was writing, I really didn't know how to write. So the author actually didn't know what to write in the first twenty chapters. Now the author just writes whatever comes to mind. Anyway, I am also a happy person. If someone makes suggestions, the author will also improve. Now let's talk about this book again. It is not the kind of book that is directly invincible. The protagonist grows up along with it. The pace of the plot may be very slow. If readers have any questions, they can ask directly. I will consider it and think it can be used as a reference. As for those who come to see Zero specifically, they may have to wait until the end of the sword chapter before they can transform again.

In terms of writing, the plot is actually okay. I'm quite picky when it comes to fanfics. I can't really read much on Tomato. I just suggest that the author shouldn't write too long when writing, and be a fan of the same person, and be one with Ultraman Zero. At least focus on the story of challenging adventures with Ultraman Zero. From the end of the writing, it feels like the whole process is a one-man show for the protagonist. Come on.

The rhythm is very slow and more daily. I prefer the daily life of Chen Kong and Tujian Taiping Tujianmi in the front. It has a sense of immediacy that I felt when I watched Ye Xiu, Su Muqiu and Su Mucheng a few years ago. If there weren't those dark things going on, there would be no need for Sai Shao to get involved. However, the only significance of Sai Shao's presence is that it is the last safety device in this daily world, allowing Chen Kong to live in this world with peace of mind, without being overly suspicious or crazy, and without having to worry about everything in front of him suddenly disappearing into nothing. Write slowly, and there is no need to rush for updates. As long as the author writes a little bit every day, the little things add up, and it is enough to take your time.

Everyday, daily, still daily (not a cool article, but it has some brains) Alas, I might as well read the original work. Look, this is another step in.

The novel can suggest giving more scenes to Zero, otherwise I almost forgot about Zero Can you write Wang Kun to death?

So will there be a Palagi Shield in the follow-up of Zero? Have you considered the idea of letting the protagonist and Zero go to other ultra worlds? After all, Zero and the protagonist need to grow up. They can't lose all skills. Are there any follow-up forms of Zero? When will the third update be restored? Not enough

It is recommended to read Chapter 6 and Chapter 7 directly, and then jump to Chapter 33 to start reading. After reading the SAO chapter, I feel that it is a single-female story, which is quite good [laughs] I don't know if the author doesn't know or what, but the age difference is set so big. The key is that the characters appear too young, they are all 13 to 14 years old. Even the oldest Asuna in the game in the past two years is only 16 years old. I can only say that it is lucky that the popularity is not high, otherwise I probably wouldn't have read this novel. Overall, it's a warm and everyday book, and it's not bad. It's a readable book, but you have to get through the early running-in chapters (most readers probably won't have the patience to read it), so you can read it for a change. (Of course, there are only about 30% of the main content of the 400-plus chapters with a single heroine. It really can't be seen that it is a multi-female novel. However, this is why this book can be single or multiple. As long as the author doesn't make mistakes, it can be written around the three appearances currently. Asuna, Xiaomi, and Eiriri. These three have actual intersections. It's not that more is not possible, but I am worried that the author will not be able to grasp it [facepalm])

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Not bad, very interesting.