Reborn: I Got Free Treats from the Campus Belle with Scallion Pancakes

Finally I'm not abandoning Bai Yueguang at the beginning. I like this kind of daily writing very much.

The interweaving of different narrative angles, the fast and urgent plot arrangement, and the right amount of lyricism is really a good book. However, sometimes I feel a little distant from the characters, maybe it's a little lyrical and a little narrative. Big cheers for the author [Like][Like][KISS]

It's so shameless and has a strong literary flavor. I wonder if the author will feel embarrassed when reading it back. I have written this kind of literary novel before, but I found it too embarrassing, so I deleted it again. As far as the plot is concerned, the writing is pretty good. It seems like there are multiple female protagonists, but I personally prefer a single female protagonist. It's a bit of the author's personal reflections. The youthful flavor is really strong, and he seems to be single, but now it's a pity that he's attracted to other girls [laughing]

I didn't expect there to be such a book written with a youthful atmosphere that is more important than business than love and hatred. Very good. Invading bit by bit in daily life. Nothing formulaic. Let the beauty unfold slowly.

Personally, I think Tomato is my favorite among the same themes. (If you want to see Zhang, please pay attention. The long-distance relationship will hardly have much scenes later) Well, after the graduation party, I started to dance. The status gap was too big, emmmm (I hate this kind of plot, it is easy to be, and I don't like to see the male protagonist making money and status in this kind of article. After all, the main theme of the previous article is daily life), but in general it is still well written. Why do you have to have a long-distance relationship to read a novel emm? There are almost no scenes with the surname Zhang and I don't want to watch anymore.

The writing is very good but the wording is very awkward, but overall it's a good author. Come on!

Get the red-haired sister quickly

The combing is very good, and the male and female protagonists are also well shaped.

It's well written, but not many people read it.

I like this kind of daily writing, but if the later part is too bullshit, I will change the review.