Harry Potter: Posing as the Dark Lord

The writing is indeed very good, the characters are well-developed, and the plot is also full of ups and downs? But Snape was a bit OOC, and in the later part when Snape discovered Rose's true identity and didn't believe her, Rose also kept a cold war, waited for Snape to apologize, and later deliberately ignored him, emmm, it was a bit weird, I still have to say, after all, I watched Harry Potter first, and then these second creations. For the original author, Rose is the character you created, and she is your OC, so you will naturally invest more emotions. I hope she can be happy, happy, or not at a disadvantage, but for me, the characters in the original work that I met earlier are naturally more important than the OC she created. What's more, concealment is Rose's problem. In addition, the surname Potter really caused too much damage to Snape. The stress and sensitivity are too normal. Otherwise, why didn't Rose say it at the beginning? So in the final emotional treatment, well, I don't side with Rose, but everything else is very good.

My favorite Snape CP novel, very good character design, very good plot I feel that the plot of getting pregnant before the war is not particularly wise.

Good guy, except for Chapters 1 and 21, everything else is updated at 18.00, So on time [eating melon] I feel that the heroine currently has a favorable impression of Snape based on movies and Ben Xian, which should be more than 60% (I have voice control, and I will be attracted to Snape when I hear a nice voice, which will directly increase my affection). I hope that the subsequent plots will not have the kind of heroine doing something for him (of course, it doesn't matter if there is, but I am tired of seeing this) I feel that it can stimulate Snape. For example, he thought that the newly appeared Dark Lord (the introduction said that the heroine will be the Dark Lord) threatened the heroine, but he found the heroine's vest. Both be and he are acceptable. I feel that the long-term relationship may be able to replace Bai Yueguang's position, but he feels that the character design (Snape's) will be a bit broken. I want to see the heroine change her persona (it is said in the article that the heroine sets up her persona in front of Snape). How about changing to a bitch? Or maybe she is a bitch by nature [eating melon] I want to see Snape being shy. I think it would be interesting (come on, Snape is so cute when he gets angry) [laughing] I feel like it's a rather cool novel. The heroine is quite strong and has unique abilities (this makes me happy). Snape gives the heroine a unique treatment (which is quite unique (funny)). It's not a loss if you invest in it.

It would be great if it could be rated 4.5. The first half is quite enjoyable to read, the setting is novel and interesting, the ideas are very good, and the descriptions in many places are very beautiful. It is a pity that the image creation of Sri Lankan religion in the later period was somewhat weak. From the moment the heroine left Holdwards, the image of Tom started to feel a little confusing. Tom's plot was okay at the beginning, but it felt a little unfocused later on. Personally, I feel that the two characters of the heroine are not clearly shaped very well, and they are all written from the heart. In particular, the heroine is obviously portrayed as resolute and courageous or as a devil. As a result, in the later period, I was tangled up in worries about gains and losses, and the inexplicable plot, and I doubted that the author wrote whatever he thought of, deviated from the course, only cared about himself, and forgot about the protagonist image he created. But it is still worth a bite. I almost finished it in one day and am looking forward to the author's next book.

It's good to read, but I think their emotional line will be very long. I hope they don't give up. It has been added to the bookshelf and I look forward to the follow-up stories [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Attention][Attention][Attention][Adoration]

Wow, the writing is very good, and the interactions are quite sweet. I think the heroine not only likes Sri Lanka, but also the characters in Harry, and the lost youth in her previous life. But I prefer Sri Lanka to teach, hehehe, I love watching, more, more, more [shy][shy]

Although I don't know why the pregnancy was arranged at the critical moment of the war, the overall plot so far is still very good. The female protagonist is stable, very strong and smart, and there is basically nothing wrong with it. It's just that the relationship between Si Jiao and her needs a period of entanglement before it can be completely stable. I hope you can continue to read the novel easily.

Apart from running with the ball, it's really good. The heroine's emotional handling in the early stage can be better. For example, the heroine can resist the professor and refuse to help, or the heroine is willing to help because she wants to hear the professor's voice more. Otherwise, the heroine will appear to be a bit too easy to bully. The professor's emotional transition could also be more subtle, but it already feels very stretched. It might be best to have a chance to talk about the two masks of the heroine in front of the professor? There's absolutely no need to pretend, right? It might be uncomfortable to keep pretending to be two extreme personalities. The new side cookies are also good, I also like this kind of light and sweet snack. Except for running with the ball, if this article has more than nine points, I will give it four stars. After all, running with the ball is too weird. But it's only 8.1, So I still give the author extra points.

After watching half of it, the overall feeling is pretty good, the writing is also okay, and several settings are also very novel, such as the heroine pretending to be another Tom Riddle, forming a three-legged check and balance situation. Basically, the characters in this book are not very serious OOC. Sometimes, I think some vague OOC is actually a matter of plot setting. The most regretful thing, and the one I didn't finish watching, is that some plot points that should have been the climax were not pushed forward, such as the setting that Snape asked the heroine to forget. Although the heroine did not forget it, Snape probably didn't know this, but I don't know why I didn't see this part of the explanation until the heroine dropped her vest🤔 And the heroine's forgiveness seemed to be a little quick🤔

The content is wonderful, but no OC matches the character. The characters are real and the transitions are smooth and smooth. A bit short but very nice