Book 2 of Nanjing 191

I read a few chapters, but I just couldn't take it anymore. The writing was incoherent and disjointed. And it was like the author had never seen a woman before; every woman was described with some kind of seductive glance or alluring mannerisms. After being exposed to the elements every day, how could they possibly care about their appearance?

The writing is nonsensical; the characters become unable to walk when they see women, perform tasks like a clown, and negotiate directly with the underworld.

Stop causing trouble and go home to farm.

Your detailed descriptions of every woman make it seem like you've never seen a woman before.

The author seems to be trying hard to be humorous, but unfortunately, there are too many random adjectives, creating a severe sense of disjointedness and making it impossible to get into the story. It's like trying to draw a snake; not only do you add legs, but you also draw lots of hair on its scales, try to draw tusks in its mouth, and add humps to its back... Resulting in something that's neither fish nor fowl.

Good grief, I still don't understand it.

It must have been written by AI; it's a mess, nonsensical, and utterly inexplicable!

The AI-generated book is completely mismatched; it's utterly absurd.

It's inexplicable.

Keep it up! 👏