My Senior Sister Cultivates the Heartless Path, and the Protagonist Cries on His Knees

Received the goods, very delicious, both adults and children love it.

It feels good to watch. There is no golden finger of the system, only Wen's efforts. It feels very real but also has a sense of powerlessness. But even so, Wen is also using his own way to protect the senior sister, and the senior sister is also silently protecting her, running in both directions.

It's both sharp and sweet, and there are also some funny scenes. It's really good, but the writing at the beginning is a bit messy, the logic is not very clear, and some places are inexplicable, but! Except for the first twenty or so chapters, which are a bit messy, the following chapters are very well written, and the foreshadowing is very good. Although the writing is a bit obvious, it is the best to arouse curiosity without giving the full picture. The emotional descriptions are very delicate, and the relationship between the protagonists transitions very smoothly. There has always been a foundation for their relationship, and it is not abrupt at all when they actually become lovers.

Very well written! ! ! When I first saw it, I just thought it would be a good one about cultivating immortals. Then after reading the introduction, I felt that it suited my taste. When I read the early part, it was actually not bad. Then I became more and more addicted to it, so I finished it in less than a day. Then I felt that the relationship between Shen and Su was very stretched and tortuous, and I could only The ending is good. To be honest, when I saw the descriptions of our Senior Sister Shen, I wanted to cry when I saw those descriptions, because her background is really too tortuous and pitiful. Anyway, I think the character creation and environment rendering are very good. I hope that she will write better in the future.

Oh my god, it's really good to watch. I can finish it in one night. It's really cool! Recommended, the senior sister is the talkative one, the junior sister is a little funny, most of the text is ambiguous, and it is also very interesting. Because it is not a long article, I read it with gusto, and I don't have the urge to skip reading because it is too long and I lose patience. Those who like to read ambiguous teases are in luck! The worldview is neither too big nor too small, and the author writes it very well. After reading it, you won't feel that the whole world is only described by two female protagonists, which is too long and uncomfortable. Anyway, it is a book suitable for office workers who have a day off and want to read it in one night! Although the first few chapters are not that attractive to me, the later chapters are quite interesting. The Gospel of Pure Love [Shy] Anyway, I enjoyed it after reading it.

I've seen a lot of double heroine movies before, and this one is the best one I think. Basically, I just didn't have any interest in the previous ones. It's so well written🌹😘Thanks to the author, hehe

It looks good, but the author sometimes writes unnatural transitions. Overall, it's pretty good. The first Lily book I read on Tomato [I learned it] ——2024.11.2

Some plots are not perfect and the connection is not very good, but I personally think that the overall story is very good. I like the main plot. There are no surprises in the plot, and the emotional line is quite clear. Moreover, this kind of redemption story really pokes me. The way Wen Wen Fen Fen is determined to redeem Shen Shui regardless of his own safety is so enviable. I hope everyone can meet their own redemption and enjoy the beautiful happiness that goes in both directions [almost crying] There are no redundant systems or anything like that (it's annoying to see redundant and brainless systems now), and the plot is fast-paced (although I like it, but I feel that there are foreshadowings and some nodes that could have written a lot of interesting plots but I didn't write them, which is a bit regretful). It's a bit rushed, and it will definitely be better if more time is spent polishing it. I was very envious of my junior sister's relationship. The two of them hugged each other to keep each other warm. I've seen people say that it's not a bit sadistic and it's just mediocre (although I also like sadomasochism sometimes), but in this article I think it's pretty good. I think real love should be open and generous, and doesn't need so many twists and turns. Su Shangwen, a real person, has such strong emotions for Shen Shui, a person in the book. In the past, he was just a walk-on and tried hard to change Shen Shui's ending (although the plot later became a small one). I was moved by the way Su Shangwen risked his own life to save Shen Shui. The miserable senior sister Shen Shui is saved by Su Shangwen on the verge of collapse. Su Shangwen, who is lonely in reality, can wear a book and embrace his single push. It is really a great blessing for both parties. It's also a pity that I think Shen Shui's character portrayal is not perfect. Even if there is a background and life experience, the changes in his feelings for Su Shangwen are not natural (the pace is too fast). Su Sangwen at least sees Shen Shui's story from beginning to end. He is so moved by her character that he likes her and even dreams of exchanging comments with other netizens (maybe this is how a miracle gave them a chance to be happy [laughing]) I am a relatively emotional person but not good at expressing myself. There is a lot I want to say but I can't write it down. I can only write something casually to express my feelings (a poor comment) It was hard to calm down after reading it for a long time, and I was full of envy and blessings for their happiness. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. I'm just a rat who wants to continue to spy on their happiness [crying]

It's really good-looking. Two people who have no home comfort each other and form a warm little home. The moment Wenwen helps Shen Shui break the prejudice of other novels, especially after returning to modern times, the extra chapters of the two of them are really super good-looking [Love] [Love] [Love]

I accidentally discovered this book and spent a day reading it. It is really beautiful. The front is a little confusing, but the writing gets better and better later on. The writing is also very good and I feel comfortable reading it. The emotional line is written very smoothly and naturally. The feelings gradually become richer and the atmosphere gradually becomes ambiguous. The writing is not abrupt at all. The ambiguous period of the two people's pull is so beautifully written. I really enjoyed it. I was so happy. I was fascinated by it. I couldn't stop laughing. It's a very refreshing little cookie. It's sour and cruel. It's very natural. Open your eyes and take a look. I won't believe that your eyes are empty after reading it! There are no subtitles in the whole text, and there is no problem of enchanting ♂ or only torturing one party. The distribution of highlights is quite even, and the characters of the two protagonists are also very good. I read it quite happily. It has been a long time since I felt so comfortable reading a text. Alas, I have done nothing but read this book all day long. Don't say anything else. You will understand after reading it, okay?