The First Book by the Folks Where the White Clouds Rise
白雲生处人家的第一本书
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- 258k Words
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- 2y ago
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94Chapters
260Reads · 30 days
357.4kReads · all time
7.3Score
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Host, can I offer some suggestions? Please don't criticize if you disagree. I'll add some Yin-Yang and Bagua elements when I revise it.
This feels like Tomato's best Sword Comes fanfiction ever, it's just too short! Could the author please update more? 💕💕 It's definitely getting better and better as you read on. After leaving Chen Ping'an's main storyline, it feels like the author is more free to write. It has a very general manager feel to it, but it's not as verbose. Also, since it's the holidays, I can update more often. The rating will definitely go up. I'm currently reading 200,000 words. Keep it up!
Yes, it's far superior to other fanfictions of "Sword Comes". But why is the score so low? Other fanfictions of "Sword Comes" on Tomato have such high scores, and one author even thinks he's writing very well, rambling on and on in the comments section of each chapter. I only read a few chapters because of the nostalgia for "Sword Comes", but I really couldn't continue reading later. This one is good, and I have the desire to keep reading.
Excellent! Keep it up, author! I love reading this!
The plot is quite good, and the writing is decent. The author can write with confidence and boldness; once it gets longer, it will definitely have a large readership.
Among the few fanfictions of "Sword Comes," this book is quite good; the theme and overall plot are decent. However, the writing style is a bit lacking, and it includes some ridiculous plot points. Overall, it's not bad, but author, could you please update faster?
This is the most fitting Sword Comes fanfiction I've read. Sword Comes' style is all about subtle, understated coolness, and this one fits perfectly. There are a few minor issues, but it seems normal overall. The last one I read, something about Chen Ping'an's biological brother, was ridiculously over-the-top; it was just forced coolness and contrived emotions.
Of all the many fanfics about Sword and Fairy, this one is the best! If the update speed increases, it's bound to become a hit.
This is the best Sword Comes fanfiction ever, no arguments allowed. Keep up the good work, author!
It's very good, but I don't know if I can continue writing it.