A Bone-Cleaver's First Book

This book is a continuation of the original work. It is wonderful and has flaws. What are the flaws? 1. Now this book tries hard to show that it is better than the original work, but it is a bit too much; 2. There are many characters in the book, and each character wants to be brilliant. Instead, it is chaotic and does not highlight who the protagonist is. The protagonist is Chen Pingan. The emphasis on color should describe his spirituality and awesomeness. If you write that everyone is awesome, can you still highlight Chen Pingan? 3. The plot pace jumps too fast and there is no primary or secondary context. Did the author want to write about the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period? No matter what, the author still writes carefully. It cannot be seen that the author's writing style and citation of scriptures are very hard work. We should not always think of surpassing others. In fact, it is enough to surpass ourselves. Let's briefly comment on this book...

The writing is very detailed, the emotional scenes are great, and the imagination is big enough, half-step into the managerial realm 🤦

Take care of that set of things, my family is full [full] One hundred thousand words, thank you fellow Taoists for accompanying me💕💕💕💕💕

This is the best Kenlai fanfic I have read so far

Nice!!!

A bit interesting, fast food style

It would be better if the title of the book is concise

Good, good, good Really good