Super God Academy: He Xi, Don't Come Any Closer!

The writing is very good, the reason why I only gave four stars is because I think it is too few. But something feels a little wrong. Since the protagonist, as a universe observer, should be the strongest in the universe, why can't he defeat the fourth generation god? (Of course it's just something I don't think is right.) Also, your profile says that the heroine also has Yan and Qilin. Hmm, wouldn't it be a bit strange (the protagonist has taken down Kesha's apprentice.) But I think it's better, much better than giving it to Ge Xiaolun, that loser.

Finished reading [laughing evilly] First of all, let's talk about the setting. This is the only one I've read among more than a hundred super-god fanfics where the protagonist can change the timeline when the Three Kings period comes, so that Liang Bing doesn't turn into Morgana. It's really the only one I've read. If you don't tell me, I won't write a book just because you don't follow the plot. This is a good comment. Secondly, let's talk about the smoothness of the plot in the early and mid-term. Except for pushing the protagonist too high in the beginning, which caused the readers' psychological expectations to be too high, so that when higher-level creatures appeared in the back door, it made people feel that the protagonist was a bit useless or poisonous. The rest was okay. However, some people think that unimportant things can be skipped and do not need to be described too much. This is a matter of opinion. I have seen many protagonists with a timeline of 30,000 years describe the period of the three kings. They did nothing but protect the three kings and then went straight to 30,000 years later. They were still scolded. I won't say much about the plot in the middle and later stages. The setting is relatively novel and there are no major poisonous points. However, maybe many readers really like to take poison. As a result, authors who do not follow the plot are not popular. The author can't afford to eat and ends it quickly, so that the subsequent plot is a bit boring and sloppy. Oh, also, it's good to give out sweets every day. Although I'm not here to eat dog food, after reading a lot of data, eating sweets occasionally won't be too boring. All in all, it was quite fun to read. Finally, the author changed the plot of the original work. One last complaint: Damn it, you said you were 30,000 years ago, and you let Liang Bing become Morgana. After 30,000 years, everything will be the same. You time travel through time, where is your mother?

Come on! But there is still a feeling. Incompetence as a cosmic observer The triangle has violated the stability of the universe. Forget it, I won't push it anymore. Come on, author. Just look good and that's it

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It's a pretty good fanfic. It would be better if the author wrote the emotional line more delicately.

It's still very interesting, but I don't understand that so many people are reading it, and there are no book reviews.

It's a super god book that I read and it's considered good-looking. I hope the author won't stop updating like "Super God Six-Eared Macaque" and "Super God Qingyuan Miao Dao Zhenjun". Come on, author [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

It's very nice and the quality is good. Can the author update it?

Come on, your writing is okay

Thank you to the author, it's very beautiful