“This novel is pure nonsense. Any resemblance to actual events is purely coincidental.”
500 BC: Spiritual qi revival sweeps the world. People nourish their bodies with spiritual qi, while disasters descend one after another: tsunamis, landslides, and forest fires. The world is quietly changing.
476 BC: The Seven Warring States stand in opposition.
247 BC: The First Emperor ascends the throne.
221 BC: After years of war, the First Emperor ends centuries of conflict and unifies the six states.
215 BC: Heaven and Earth are not benevolent, treating all things like straw dogs. For centuries, calamities have rained down from the heavens, leaving the people in misery.
214 BC: The First Emperor recruits heroes far and wide, stockpiling provisions and expanding his army.
211 BC: The First Emperor declares war on Heaven!
210 BC: Spiritual qi begins to dissipate, and natural disasters grow less frequent. No one knows what happened.
2013: A huge hole suddenly appears in the sky above Juxia City, and a man named Zhao Zheng enters the public eye.
Your writing is domineering enough, but the protagonist is a bit too domineering. My personal opinion, if you don't like it, don't criticize.