[Central Command: Correction Team] Win Hearts First

The writing is superb, the emotions are really delicate, and the logic is also very good. I really like the relationship between the male and female protagonists, especially the male protagonist who always guides me gently. Wow, and the plots in each world are also very novel. The most important thing is that when the female protagonist is strong, the male protagonist is really like a puppy, hehehe [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]. The ss interaction between the male and female protagonists in the first world is also very delicious! ! ! The writing is also great! It's just one world, only a few dozen chapters, so I must write more worlds [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

This quick travel article is really touching! The setting of the male protagonist traveling through various worlds to save the female protagonist is actually not new, but the author has written the emotional line extremely delicately. There is no love-at-first-sight routine, but a slowly growing warmth. The first world is particularly real. The female protagonist is not a paper person. She is flesh and blood and can be stubborn, jealous, hesitant and nervous. The male protagonist is also gentle and smoky. I like to see the little details of their daily interactions, such as the hero asking the heroine to spend New Year's Eve with him, the two of them going to the supermarket to buy clothes, setting off fireworks and watching movies, etc. Or maybe the original heroine has created a cute image, or the heroine secretly wiped her tears and the hero didn't ask...

I haven't written a book review for a long time, so I'll write briefly. As a work that unfolds from the perspective of the male protagonist, 7° is particularly successful in shaping the image. He is not a superior "savior", but step by step closer to the heart of the offset character through companionship, understanding and guidance. Whether it is the preference given to "children who lack love" in the campus chapter, or the firmness of "No matter what you become, I will love you" in the apocalyptic chapter, 7° always shows a delicate and tolerant tenderness. This kind of tenderness is not weakness, but a deep emotional strength, allowing readers to feel the emotional sedimentation even in the fast-paced plot. Although the story spans multiple worlds and settings, the author always maintains "emotional coherence." Although the 701s in each small world have different identities and personalities, they all have a real and touching connection with 7°. There is no sudden emotional development, and there is no mechanical "routine love". Every heartbeat has a trace to follow, and every redemption comes naturally. In particular, the design of "love" as the final method in the "End Times" pushes the emotional theme of the book to a climax, echoing the sentence in the introduction: "Yes, all it takes is a lot of love." As the book says: "Eternal love is my sincerity in liking you." And this sincerity, the author has truly conveyed it to every reader through words.

Looks good! This book belongs to the type of book that gets better and better. I didn't get into it at first. I felt that the male protagonist was a bit like a human machine [laughing awkwardly], and some of his mental activities and expressions seemed to be floating outside. But the heroine's character is very good and she is very independent! A lot of words are devoted to the female protagonist. Although the male protagonist is the one who conquers the novel, it is not like some other novels where the female protagonist is passive and placed in a position of being "liked". You can see the active "liking" of the female protagonist. I really like this feeling of "licking the dog" (no derogatory meaning) for each other! It's love that goes both ways. Please update the author quickly [Blow kiss] The combination of the witch and the puppy is really cute.

This is one of the quick-travel stories from a boy's perspective that I've seen so far. It's the most beautiful. The emotional line is written in a way that I like very much. I don't fall in love suddenly and out of nowhere, but there is a process, and the way I get along is super loving! The ending is also good and doesn't end abruptly. I hope the following content will be more high-quality and good-looking

I have only read the first story so far, and my rating is perfect The relationship between the male protagonist 7° and the female protagonist 701 particularly touched me. The warmth between them made me want to bloom towards the sunshine [crying] Quickly wear the male protagonist (responsible, has normal human emotions, and has a positive personality) Anyway, I feel that the male protagonist is already a perfect match [face covering] It's a bit sad in the middle (actually it's not bad), but after this sad episode is over, it becomes endlessly sweet [laughs] If I meet someone like the male protagonist, even if I am a man, I will have to fall in and trick the male protagonist into going to Chengdu to be together [laughter]

That's great. I've been thinking about it since I read the novel, why is it that the female protagonist has always been the one to save the male protagonist, and now the male protagonist has to save the female protagonist. Moreover, the characters created by the author are very good, and the plot logic is also great. I love it so much, it's a blast!

Overall, the setting is very novel and the writing is okay. But I can't quite accept the character of the heroine in the first world. In the original plot, Yang's mother's family gave her a lot of love and help, but because they moved later and did not continue to be nice to the heroine and did not truly regard her as her closest family member, the heroine collapsed and killed the entire family? Her mother was so mean to her, why didn't she go against her own mother? I can't understand it very much. From some details in the article, it can be seen that the main character of the heroine is kind, but the paranoid character caused by the tragic past makes me feel that it is unacceptable. The character is somewhat fragmented and not very attractive. The character of the male protagonist is also a bit unclear. The process of the male protagonist falling in love with the female protagonist is a bit far-fetched in my opinion, and the foreshadowing is not very good, but the atmosphere after the love is well written. The author's characterization didn't particularly appeal to me. But the overall setting and the foreshadowing laid out above are all of my interest, and I also think innovative works are worthy of encouragement, so I plan to stick with it and see the next world.

The male protagonist Qin Du (7°) travels through various small worlds as a corrector, gently dismantling the deviant content of the female protagonist Qi Lingyi (701). From strange temptations to heart-to-heart dependence, every drop in the danger value is the heartbeat hidden in the plot. The delicate emotional foreshadowing, the right amount of sweetness, and the warmth that goes in both directions make this cross-world love particularly touching.

Help! ! ! ! It's really good to watch. I couldn't help but leave a five-star review before I finished reading it. [Crying] The characters are so interesting. I'm satisfied with the settings that I usually want to see but never see. The key is BG! BG! BG! I love BG!!! The male protagonist's perspective is even more special. The wet female ghost and other things are also very shocking and delicious [crying] All the perverted XPs are satisfied. The key is that the girl and boy are all very good babies, and the supporting roles are good for everyone! Woo woo woo woo. It would be better if I could keep writing more settings [crying][crying][crying]