Naruto: Obito and I Save Each Other

Overall, it is a good book [Eating Melon]. I also like the character of the protagonist, haha. He is good at cooking but also gentle. I like the wifey flavor. She is like a male mother. In the early stage of Obito, the little tsundere and the big dog also like to cry. Hehe, [Exploration] There is no system, so the gold finger is a bit too wide. After all, Naruto's mortality rate is extremely high, so it's okay to open it a bit wider. [Eating Melon] And the author updates pretty quickly. I hope the author doesn't give up, updates well, and works hard [shy][shy]

At present, there is no poisonous point. To be more serious, the protagonist's hang-up is a bit too big, and I am worried that it will collapse in the later stage. I originally read it as a sketch, but up to this chapter, the plot arrangement is pretty good (generally, I don't have any hope for the plot in this kind of novel). As long as you can control it well and don't let the protagonist's plot completely collapse later, it won't be a big problem. However, it is a bit dangerous to turn it into a plot. After all, the plot is too difficult to control. Videos can bring intuitive visual effects through the screen. It doesn't matter, but text can bring this kind of impact to the test of penmanship. Good writing is naturally hearty, but if you don't grasp it well, it will become a soup with too much salt and water. This is also an important reason why many times I would rather watch Naruto fics without plot than to give up the plot and focus on Naruto fics. Too many people write that they can't control it at the end, and they start to open a harem to raise the ceiling like a story about a proud stallion who got up early. From my point of view, Naruto is a more serious one among the three major migrant workers. I might feel better if this kind of operation is placed in One Piece. It is really inexplicable that this kind of thing appears in Naruto. If you want to write this kind of thing, you can just open the fantasy framework and write it. There is no need to use this IP. I have to say more, because it is rare to see an example of a cookie story with a good plot arrangement. I don't want it to fall apart in the later stage and have one star rating left to finish it. After all, this kind of story break is the number one enemy.

Ahhhh, why haven't I read such a beautiful book before? ! ! The daily routine written by Mrs. Regret is so beautiful. Update soon! ! ! Emmm, it's nice to watch, but I feel like emmm, the plot is a bit too short and too comical? [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Come on, madam, she's really beautiful

So pretty! ! I also like Obito very much, but I have never been able to find any articles about Obito before. Now I have found this article by the author, which is really good! ! ! ! (Licking the screen) [Blowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss] @

Very nice, but Kakashi's father doesn't seem to be named White Fang White Fang is the name of his weapon (should be)

I have read so many Naruto fanfics, and this is one that I like very much. The protagonist is basically invincible or semi-invincible. In short, come on, the author (ง•̀_•́)ง, please update more and more.ヽ(爱´∀'爱)ノ

It's my first time to see such a prolific author. I'm so happy! There is another question, is the protagonist going up or down?

Very beautiful, so cute But there are still big shortcomings. I want to criticize this point. The update speed is too slow and I can't even watch it. What's wrong? It would take twenty or thirty chapters a day to barely read it, right? I hope the author will work harder and not take advantage of others [please update]

Everything about this book is good, but there is one thing that is particularly bad about it, and that is: why does the author write so well but now only has this little bit? It's so appetizing, and not enough to read. [Cry][cry][cry]

Ryota is my 🍐, overall it's very good, the daily writing is good, but the pace is a bit slow, the two kids are too young, but there's no big problem, mainly because I like to read Shota's posts