Aotu World: A Soul Transmigrates into Tianping

Super super pretty! The author's writing style is very delicate (but sometimes it feels like vernacular, but it is already great and can be read as a daily article), and sometimes the writing style is great! (It probably feels like, for example, my composition is like this, beginning: epic, middle: history, end: epic, but the author writes really well) The protagonist is very funny, omnivorous people can eat with confidence, and interacts with everyone very frequently, and he is super patient! It doesn't feel very OOC, but I feel that the portrayal of Jin is a bit emm. You know, and Perry, well, it just feels a bit... Too silly (doubtful). Lei Shi doesn't feel that he is easily angered. To be honest, Gardross, I don't understand the positioning, because you said that the relationship between the protagonist and him is good, but it doesn't feel that good, and you say no, but it feels good. Yes, it's just a bit weird... Zuma's approval when faced with Garderros (probably because he knows what it means, oh, that's all I'm saying) shouldn't be that big or malicious (of course, it's also possible that Zuma was not present in the previous part when Garderros spoke to the protagonist). In short, it can be included. An Ge's role is not much, or even almost none, so be careful before entering. I discovered one thing. I feel like a lot of it is foreshadowing, or maybe I'm overthinking it. . . . . . . . The writing style in the early stage is also the same, funny but with knives. As expected, eating knives alone makes me feel uncomfortable, and eating sweets alone makes me feel too tired. It is better to mix the two (angrily brushing the sense of presence! (ง •̀_•́)ง) Come on, author! I really love watching this kind of thing... Don't underestimate the bond between me and Tang Knife! (Sure enough, we are still too ahead of our time, and there is such a mixed-up author.) Damn it, why can I only comment on one? ((╯°A°)╯○○○ Let's go to Master Ball!)

A very good work, the main text has been completed, you can follow it with confidence! The whole thing is quite funny, most of the early stage is just jokes, it made my stomach hurt when I laughed, it made the little girl laugh so hard, so funny. It's not like some other stories where he has been sacrificing himself for salvation, and he has to bear whatever happens. Although his clones have dissipated several times, he doesn't feel like he's always dead. Personally, it feels pretty good! The protagonist's life experience is a bit sadistic, and I was surprised to see it after reading more than 100 chapters. I finished the main text in two days, hehe. Author updated daily. Sometimes it's a blast! I think the inspiration for this book is also quite good. And the author is also a very fond fan. Although he says he has no CP, he can do it with confidence and boldness! After that, the author might even make a side story about them! ! Super darling [almost crying] [sending my heart]. The main text of Chapter 190 is finished. Although there was a bit of nagging in the middle, the final ending is he~ It's so sweet and I feel relieved👆[Love] Some of the environments are also described in detail. Hehe, the author's writing style is still very good.

The writing is pretty good (I feel like, at least it won't make people uncomfortable 😉), and I like the writing style very much! I feel like the author is quite interesting (no/the story is complete and the framework is rigorous, emm. In short, it's very interesting to watch. When you're in a bad mood, you can sweep away hunger by just reading it... Bah, it sweeps away all unpleasantness and just be yourself! Thumbs up./😚🥰 Moreover, I can talk about my own CP. The author is also very active. It should be a great pleasure to interact with the author🙃😙. If this book is finished, I hope the author can produce another masterpiece! I will definitely go and see it~ I believe it will be better in the future😊

This article is more relaxed and funny, which makes up for some regrets (I like it🔥🔥) The description of time could be a little more novel✊🏻I was a little confused in the first half of the article () Later you can see that the writing has improved (glad. Jpg) … Do you dare to suddenly post a hundred updates and scare me to death [KISS].

It's good to watch, there are a lot of jokes and it's so funny, the protagonist is pretty good, the character design is not broken so far, the plot is ok, but there is not much writing, please try to update it, there should be a knife after the plot, I have already seen the foreshadowing, in short, I recommend [Love]

I have read a lot of convex and concave fanfics on Tomato, but this is the only one that I have read several times. The character of Novis is really attractive to me. Not only does he redeem everyone who is concave and convex, but he also walks out of the shadows of the past with everyone's help. I believe that one day, even if Novis no longer "acts", he can still be a cheerful and out-of-the-box person. I hope that he can be happy from the bottom of his heart and live happily. I especially like the academy chapter, it really gives me a feeling of peace and tranquility. Baby Novis may always be happy! ! ! It's more important than anything else for you and everyone at Aoyu to live a good life! ! !

Teacher, you are not only eye-catching, humorous, talented, fresh and handsome, suave, handsome, gentle, elegant, erudite, modest, generous, well-informed, gentle, discerning, sensitive and eager to learn, as wise as a fool, and open-minded. , Both good looks and good looks are a sign of talent, a romantic talent, fresh and handsome, suave, handsome, elegant, knowledgeable, a humble gentleman, and generous are a sign of talent, a romantic talent, fresh and handsome, suave, handsome, smart, suave, and a handsome young man , Mountain eyebrows and watery eyes, humorous, talented, romantic and talented, fresh and handsome, suave, handsome, gentle and elegant, erudite, humble gentleman, generous, well-informed, humble gentleman, uniquely discerning, sensitive and eager to learn, as wise as a fool, open-minded, With both appearance and appearance, you are loved by everyone, you are loved by flowers, you are loved by cars, you are calm, steady and funny, your beauty is as bright and dazzling as the bright moon hanging high in the night sky; and your character is like the legendary Messiah, pure, noble, sacred and inviolable. Being able to meet you is truly the greatest blessing in my life. And your writing is so good. You are indeed the god I have met!

A super nice book! It's a bit funny, but the writing style is a bit immature. The protagonist could use more positive descriptions to make the characters richer, but the writing style is improving all the time! They are also very diligent in updating! Highly recommended! I have become a fan of the palace, please look familiar with me ✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*.

I changed the rating. This book is really good, very funny but also very sharp. It makes up for a lot of my regrets. There is no particularly sharp plot, but it's not because I feel that Novis himself is very sharp. He didn't get over it after the death of his younger brother. Later, whether in the competition or in the academy, he always Acting, using a smile to cover up living in the past, but the final outcome of the competition is that Novis is moving towards a new beginning. They have been redeeming each other, Lei Shi and others are helping Novis come out, and Da Da, whether it is the competition or the academy, the writing is very good (the above is a personal opinion, please do not criticize) It can also be said that DaDa's book is the second book I have read all about concavity. Although it has not been updated, it is really well written and has a super word count. Finally, DaDa, please keep updating, but you must also pay attention to your health and eat well😘Finally, I wish DaDa happy every day😊happiness! 🥰 (⑅˃◡˂⑅)

It's so beautiful, I feel like it's one of the most beautiful books among all the books I've read [shy][shy][shy][shy][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving]