Transmigrating and Finding a Little Baby to Be My Sister

It's pretty cool, but sometimes I feel awkward when I keep using the word Nasha. In addition, this book is very meticulously written and has a slightly slow pace, making it suitable for reading later.

It's well written, but it's too slow. Slowly write a good book [like][like][like][like][like]

You can watch it to pass the time

The author gives you two suggestions: 1* It is said that no book is written by coincidence. As a person who has traveled through ancient times, the protagonist's knowledge in politics, economy, military and other aspects is a dimensionality-reducing blow to ancient people. The plot of the novel is to encounter problems one after another that are difficult or unimaginable for ancient people. Things that the protagonist can easily handle with the knowledge and knowledge of modern people. If the protagonist cannot solve the problem from the perspective of modern people, without the help of noble people, it will be resolved by unexpected chance and coincidence, and he will always be invincible. There are no coincidences in the book. In this way, the rhythm of the story will be very compact, not wordy, and exciting? 2*Have you seen the short play? Writing a novel requires that kind of rhythm to make it interesting. Looking at your novel, I feel that you are not writing a novel. Except for the beginning, it is okay. The rest seems to be recording life. It is too detailed and feels very long-winded and boring. I am more patient. After reading almost ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. Didn't you notice that there are almost no comments at the end? 3. The theme of the novel is raising cute babies, so the cute girl is also one of the protagonists. What is her role? The protagonist has the vision and cognition of modern people and can reduce the dimensionality of ancient people. As one of the protagonists, the cute girl should also occupy half of the story. What supporting role does she have for the protagonist so that he can always take her with him? For example: the cute baby girl can hear other people's thoughts and tell the protagonist, and the protagonist uses her to know what others are thinking to solve problems. Another example is: the cute baby girl can look at treasures and hunt for them. Everything the protagonist encounters is related to this, so he has to take her with him all the time. 4. It's a coincidence that the protagonist can travel through time, and the second protagonist can also have special functions. Does this combination fit the theme? Every time you encounter a problem, you can easily solve it, and you will feel constantly refreshed?

The writing is more detailed and the description is clear. My favorite is Niu Niu. The only bad thing is that, that, that, that, that, that, etc., It's really uncomfortable to hear it.

Family and state affairs are major events for everyone and every local organization in the Chinese nation. In a harmonious China, the moral harmony of the Chinese nation that gives in to each other builds the ups and downs of China. We share the happiness of China and fight the aggressors at the top, and dare to fight against any hegemonism at the bottom!

This book is suitable for foreigners to use when taking Chinese exams. Asking what "that" means in the book [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

Very well written! It's just that the update is a bit slow [smile]. I hope the author will continue writing and not stop updating [OK]

It's a very good novel, but the score is too low. It's so well-written that it only scores 7.5. I don't know how to score it. To be honest, this novel beats many 9.9-Score novels. The details and the plot are very well written.

It's very interesting, I read many chapters in one go [laughs], I'm looking forward to the updates. [Like][laugh]