Naraka: Bladepoint: My Pact with the Heroes

This is really well-written. Although it's fast-paced, the characters are very well-developed! It has the feel of a wish-fulfillment novel, but without the overpowered protagonist! I just hope it doesn't stop updating and that they add a female lead!

This is the first time I've seen a novel about eternal damnation, and the plot is quite good. I hope it doesn't stop updating.

A story set in the Ming Dynasty. It features a monk as an advisor and depicts bloodshed on the northern grasslands. I strongly suspect that Emperor Yanwu is based on the Yongle Emperor.

Yes, yes, it looks good.

Our Eternal Calamity also has its own great book! The character portrayals are very well done, and I feel there are no major flaws, but the updates are too slow. I'll focus on developing the female lead first. Could you perhaps introduce a fox spirit? 🥰🥰🥰

It's definitely a good read among Eternal Calamity novels, but the urban scenes are a bit lacking. I hope the author can add more urban scenes. Personally, I felt it wasn't enough that the protagonist returned to the Eternal Calamity Continent so soon after his return (this is just my personal opinion and suggestion; if the author feels this is inappropriate, please ignore it and continue to work on your own ideas).

Sure, the plot logic is okay so far.

Having finished the first phase, I feel the protagonist is a bit dull, or rather, immature. I hope the Eternal Calamity Continent storyline can take up more space; I believe everyone is here for that reason 🤭. Also, Ji Yingying absolutely must be in the harem! I love her so much. It's already great that the author even started writing at all. I had considered writing one myself before, but I failed. I hope the author doesn't stop updating. Keep it up! ❤️

Well, the writing is pretty good overall, but the realistic plot points aren't as well done. The parts before the game with Mike are quite good; those could have been glossed over, and the focus could have been on the trial-related plot. There aren't many people writing Eternal Calamity fanfiction right now, so you should be quite popular. Keep it up!

Seeing a novel about an eternal world is easy, but writing about eternal worlds is difficult because it requires a fantasy setting. However, it seems like most game-themed novels are set in urban environments. Keep up the good work!