Becoming a God, Starting with Nightmares

On the dilapidated ancient street, a resolute-faced young man gasped: "It's still a little bit worse. This space wall is obviously the weakest in this world, but I still put in so much effort." The black clouds in the sky have been lingering for a while, and the clouds roared from time to time, but all this is in vain, because this is a forbidden place where even a large person will die if he enters. The young man took out a glowing elixir from the ring. When the elixir was taken out, the heaven seemed to tremble, attracting countless ancient tribesmen to look towards the forbidden place. The boy swallowed it in one gulp, and his pale cheeks seemed to turn rosy. "Broken!" The young man shouted, pointing the sword in his hand at that space. Finally, it seemed that the space could not withstand the power of this blow, and a hole opened. The young man felt happy and entered the space crack. The boy reappeared in a bright room with a dog author sitting at the computer desk. Seeing the young man's appearance, the dog author was shocked, "Who is it?" The young man looked at this man's clear eyes and raised the corners of his mouth. Looking at the surroundings, the young man seemed a little dissatisfied. He casually took out a few goldfish from the beautiful national treasury and threw them in the face of the dog author. Ignoring the dog author's surprised look, the boy stretched out his hand and lifted his chin, "Add 1 more!"

The plot is good. It doesn't look like a cliche plot. I believe it is a book with potential. The author must continue to write more books. If it is like the last one, then I will come to Henan to knife you (`д´)ゝ Come on, update, and work hard to write, author, I believe you can do it (｡･ω･｡) It's just that the plot in the middle is a bit rushed.

The overall outline and theme are good and very attractive. However, the characterization is not vivid enough, and the psychology of the characters is not delicate enough. In some places, it feels like a flowing novel. I feel that the characters' IQ and psychological ideals are too simple, and there is no sense of social complexity. If the author detailed the entire novel and deepened or complicated the psychology of various characters, it might explode. The author's overall ideas and direction are good. It is a novel with great potential.

If you like this book, or want a character, take a look at the table of contents of chapters 106-114 of this book, come in and tell me your character design, and you will randomly get a supporting character experience card! A large-scale live-action scripted killing, waiting for you to van↗[smile]

I honestly say that this book is really reliable, mostly descriptions, with a clear structure, and the content is substantial. The only shortcoming is that it is a bit unreadable. Angry]😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠 😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠

This book is generally very good, the setting is okay, the details are well grasped, and there are very few knives (fewer than The Lost City), but I have to give some comments to the author. 1. When you write, try not to have too many reversals, and try to leave regrets for the readers, so that the readers will be active. 2. Don't care what other people say, otherwise your rhythm will be chaotic. Only by writing at your own rhythm can you write a good article. 3. Try to have an outline before writing, and summarize what you have written before, so that the subsequent articles will stand out. 4. You have been wandering on the edge of a certain taboo in online writing, so now you need to bring the article back to the standard as soon as possible, whether it is a little sharper or not, at least don't let readers think that this novel is too plain. 5. Save more articles. The speed of updating three times a day is not very slow. However, if there is any emergency, it is recommended to save more articles before the New Year, otherwise you will not be able to have a good New Year. 6. There are not many books on this kind of subject. If you seize the opportunity now, it can become popular. Try not to have a female protagonist in this book. If there is a female protagonist, don't write about a cuckold male protagonist (one of the taboo subjects) 7. Author, you are too short, and your writing skills are stuck 😠😠😠😠 What is written behind this is really hard to describe in a word, here it is. ,. I didn't even look at it. There were more than a dozen of them, and the updates were discontinued.

Not bad, but no one there

I cried three times. The author apologizes for my tears💧! 😠😠😠 Hum!!!!

I want to give it four and a half stars, but if I don't have half a point, I'll give it five stars. The setting is pretty good, and it doesn't touch my biggest pet peeves (although I have a sister, but the author said there's no plot, so it's not a pet peeve). There's no heroine. Logically speaking, it should be my cup of tea, but the fast pace of society means I don't have the patience to read slow-moving novels. In addition, I'm a member of an official organization, and the attitude there, and to be honest, makes me feel uncomfortable, so it's not hard to do it for myself. Five stars for the author~

I think this book is really good, I don't know why so many people don't like it