Oh No, After Losing All My Cultivation, I'm Surrounded by Seven Rebellious Disciples

It's rare to see a book that blends the plot and the main plot so appropriately. It feels much better than some other 8 or 9-rated books. The female protagonist has her own personality and the male protagonist is also a competent master. I hope you won't stop updating.

The plot is wonderfully written and the writing is also very good. From the moment the male protagonist was raped by his disciple for the first time, he started to sing all the way, but the details of the assault were not well described [shy] I hope there will be more detailed descriptions in the future. Also, I hope there will be a perfect happy ending in the later stage. Come on, author, don't let the book take over.

The writing is quite good. The main character is not as incompetent as in other books who deliberately hang you up. The plot is not particularly good. I have read too many literary works and I don't pick it anymore. I feel it is better than some 80% works. After reading this book, I feel that the author can actually handle the subject of Hehuan Sect. I still can't forget that the senior sister of Hehuan Sect was the one who took the lifeline [face covering] It's a pity that she was killed. Ahem, speaking of which, this novel as a whole is quite relaxed. The balance between imprisonment and daily life is very good. Some yandere novels have four apprentices imprisoned all the time without any relaxing moments. The author has done a good job in avoiding this. It doesn't mean that relying too much on the system to constantly create new settings makes people tired, and the text with a weak system will not be particularly abrupt. Generally speaking, I personally feel very good, but the author said that he was afraid of being locked up in a small dark room and omitted many details, which is a fly in the ointment. Unfortunately, I don't like to eat a little bit of knife. I don't particularly like the ending of the future apprentice. Everything else is okay.

As for the subjective foreshadowing of the full text, this book has a high score in my mind. The plot basically doesn't have too many poisonous points, but the ending is a bit too sloppy. I'm a bit sorry. There are nearly 400 chapters of foreshadowing in the early stage. Since I can write it to this word count, I think it should have a worthy ending. Some people may say that the male protagonist is indifferent, but it is not mentioned above. From the foreshadowing, Come on, the male protagonist has experienced many reincarnations and lived for hundreds of millions of years and has witnessed the death of the female protagonists many times. From this perspective, it is not difficult to understand his behavior. Each female protagonist has her own unique character. There is nothing to comment on overall. I can only say that it is in the eye of the beholder and the wise see wisdom (purely subjective personal evaluation). I hope the author will get better and better, but there are too many pitfalls! ! You can't fill it in yourself, so at least you can do more extras! !

I forgot to comment, but why did it become less than 30 minutes?

Micro-knife? In my opinion, the blade is hanging high. I always feel like I'm going to be decapitated by a large knife in the next second. I feel itchy. Author, let me ask you why your head is so pointed [laughs]

The plot connects smoothly and the writing is pretty good, mainly that Lihua... I happen to have a friend named Lihua 😂 I hope the author can help me and add another friend Mingfu to the list.

As a bookworm with more than 1,000 hours of reading time, this book is really good, even considered to be the best in this genre. The rating is indeed a bit low. First of all, let me explain that I am not a junkie. You can check it out. I do have more than 1,000 hours of reading time on my homepage. I don't want this kind of book to be buried. , And I don't want such an author to remain unknown, so if everyone can take a look at the poisonous points, I personally think there is no problem. You can taste it for yourself, and don't believe too much in other people's comments. After all, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. I hope the author will work harder [Please update][Please update][Please update] Okay, there may be some minor issues, but they're not big. Some of the emotional scenes are a bit awkward, but others are pretty good.

The foreshadowing at the beginning is okay. I don't know why, but some people say that the first part is too long. I think the full text is very good. Although the routine setting is a bit cliché, it is much better than the logic and settings that are not well written. I think the rough rating of this book should be above 8 points.

I have never posted a book review before, but I saw that the author would read every short review I wrote, so I thought about it and posted a paragraph to share my views. First of all, I have read more than 200 chapters now, and I feel that this book should not only be rated this way. The author's writing is very good, the whole story is quite interesting, and the characters are well created. I can't understand why it is only a 7.6. I guess there are two reasons: 1. The overall pace of the book is a bit slow. If you read it as a cool article, it will easily lose readers. 2. A certain aspect of the master's portrayal may not be so likable. For example, when being pushed, it seems like he is too straight-faced? In other words, they are all passive. Generally speaking, I can accept these. Although the rating is not high, I still hope that the author will not be sad. The author's writing style is very good and I like it very much. Finally, I wish the author good health and happiness