Villain: I Raised the Protagonist’s Affection, and the Heroines Got Jealous

In fact, the protagonist is the son of destiny. In his previous life, the protagonist failed in the fight for favor and became a child. He could not get an hour for 30 days a month. As a result, in this life, he has forgotten everything and still follows the plan he made when he was an incompetent wife. First, he pulled the male protagonist away through brotherly love, then he severely controlled his love rival, and finally became the main palace [laughter][laughter][laughter]

Very, very good. Although I have only read Chapter 64 and it has been updated to Chapter 92, I still can't help but comment. This is the best short novel in terms of setting and content since I have read for 3,000 hours between my two accounts. I really don't talk about other aspects. The content alone can at least make people interested in reading. It directly surpasses most of the novels. Unlike most of the novels with the title of refreshing, but in fact, after a few chapters, you are not interested in reading. You will be interested in the later. It is useless to make people read it, but the author has achieved this. Although it may be mixed with the freshness of the new setting, there is no doubt that the author has achieved it. I hope the author will not collapse in the future. I really am too lazy to encourage and cheer. There were many new award-winning books in the past, but few of them survived. I feel that whichever book I encourage will collapse, but... I don't believe it! ! ! Author, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart][send your heart][send your heart][send your heart][send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]! ! ! It's over, okay, I should be considered alive, um... It's unfinished, a bunch of settings have not been added, but the author explained the reason in the last chapter, so I won't say more. It's a pity. I didn't see Zhu Yan express his feelings and there are a lot of character traps that haven't been added. Yang Nianlong Aotian has a lot of characters anyway. Alas, but it seems that the homework is to write a book. What can I do? Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on [send your heart], the author, come back to me [I'm about to cry]

The biggest poisonous point is the hypnosis in the early stage, other problems are harmless Withdrew, let's get together and relax. My sister's settings have been changed so much that I can't stand it anymore.

This is my first novel since I returned to Tomato and I think it is the best. The character creation, plot advancement, etc. Are all good. In my opinion, there should be no poisonous points, no more than two at most... In short, come on, you can become the author of the master of the nook and cranny! ! ! ! [Cry]

The original male protagonist is quite good [Flying Kiss] The original male protagonist has a likable personality [Flowing Kiss] The protagonist has a very upright outlook [Cool] There are some novelties: hypnosis, sex change, orthopedics, etc. [Laughing and crying] There are some rather toxic plots in the early stage, considering it is a new author [Laughing and crying] Overall It looks okay and I give it a five-star rating. [Blowing kiss] Personal suggestion: try to keep the number of female protagonists at 3 to 4 (to avoid becoming a harem drama) [laughing and crying] The plot should focus on the growth of the original male protagonist, and the side plots should be extended as the male protagonist grows (to avoid going off topic) [laughing and crying]

Not bad, very innovative. But it's a bit unsightly [thinking][thinking]

The flaws are not hidden. Although the current rating is a little low, it is not too toxic and the characters are distinct. It is considered a relatively good work. I like the personality of each character, especially Gu Jun, a bad friend. Believe me, this book is very interesting.

I forgot why I added this book to my bookshelf in the past few days, and I remembered it today and finished reading it in one night. Let me tell you quietly, the author, what you wrote about changing marriage is really fresh and interesting. It's a pity to finish it hastily. After all, this book is quite good as a refreshing novel to read at night, and the characterization is also good. But after reading the author's confession in the last chapter, there is nothing I can do about it. It's a pity that I didn't see the heroine eating part, so I had to say goodbye to these characters in the book. Sweetness is the spice of life and must not be lacking.

The story of Marriage Change (from the perspective of the original male protagonist, who is now the female protagonist), the writing style is excellent, there are very few descriptions of women's bodies in women's clothing, and the description of female degradation is spot on. Although it is a male harem story, it follows the setting of cultivating the son of luck and the woman who takes the son of luck, but the gender change of the son of luck is added, which means that the male protagonist has many women, and the emotional line is unexpectedly well written. It is a pity that it is unfinished, and they are not completely together in the end. It is a pity, but it is not bad. The plot is very interesting and the emotional line is silky. These more than 100 chapters are still worth reading~

It's pretty good so far, but don't let the protagonist change his character. If he does, he will consider changing the score.