One Piece: From the Start, I Became a Low-Ranking Soldier

I hope it's a single female lead, Nami, and that she gets the Flying Thunder God Mark. Ignore Luffy's Amazon Lily arc, then have the protagonist get randomly swatted away by Kuma, and start capturing other pirates to exchange for Berries so he can level up. After that, when Luffy goes to prison to rescue Ace, they meet, and the story follows their rampage at Marineford.

I rarely post fanfiction because if there's anything offensive, I just stop reading it. The author is the kind of person who... Like eating sunflower seeds, you know, you never know when they'll slip you a bad one. [Smirk]

Excellent! It's rare to see a male-oriented fanfic about a time-traveling pirate who doesn't have a harem. 🙂 [OK] And it skips the early Alabasta storyline, which is really good! I'm tired of fanfics that skip the early plot, so this skip is crucial. Keep it up, author! I believe in you!

It's fine for now. Let's not worry about what happens later. Just focus on a single female lead and avoid a harem. [OK]

One Piece should have less romance.

Could the author please let the protagonist win over Robin and Hancock?

Your current storyline involving sex is one of the better ones I've read. Other characters can be killed, but it's best not to kill important figures in the plot, otherwise it will lose its flavor and become less interesting. I hope you get Conqueror's Haki soon, otherwise it won't be cool enough without it. Participating in the Marineford War is pointless; focus on making money and increasing your strength. Don't stop updating! 🙂🙂🙂

It's well-written; I just hope the protagonist's bounty increases more slowly in the future. 1. A crew member is a crew member after all; no matter how capable they are, they still have to listen to the captain. 2. The protagonist's bounty is rising strangely. I don't know if it was intentional on the part of the Navy or if the author didn't think of it.

The author hopes for more frequent updates, no breaks, and that this level of quality can be maintained. Hoping to reach over a thousand chapters. One Piece fanfiction is easy to write. Hoping for more updates each day. Thank you, five-star review.

I think this book is very well written, and I hope the author will continue to update it. First, you need to understand the Naruto universe, then the One Piece storyline (which also includes many movies), and finally, you need to balance the systems between the two worlds. I hope my comments can help this book.