In a Broken World, I Walk Toward the End

Overall, there aren't any particularly outstanding problems. While they're supposed to be "of the same kind," there are still some doubts; the relationship with Airi progressed too quickly. Secondly, her relationship and communication with the heroes seem a bit lacking, but this is a common issue. Finally, there are some problems with certain aspects of the original storyline. (To be determined)

So far, there are no major issues. The protagonist is learning the Taixu Sword God technique. Although I haven't read the manga and don't know the specifics of these moves, it doesn't affect the reading experience. This kind of subtle, visible progress is quite good; it avoids the mindless, overpowered feel of typical wish-fulfillment novels. I hope to see a pioneering spirit in the protagonist. While saving the world is important, it's too heavy a theme, and I've read too many of those.

It's so, so, so beautiful!

It's pretty good. Although it's easy to make spelling mistakes, it's corrected quickly. 👍 The writing style is also visibly improving. I hope Ellie gets a happy ending.

Well, it's beautiful, that's all, it just doesn't attract many viewers. 🍉

I suddenly realized I haven't left a review after reading for so long! And secondly, updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates! Updates!

So, can Arisia herself survive? Not the memory, but the real Arisia. The Herrscher of Humanity desperately wants her to live into the next civilization era alongside the other heroes who would otherwise have sacrificed themselves, so she can personally witness the miracle she created.

So far it's good, but how will the protagonist travel to a previous civilization? Won't he have to die once?

The content was interesting, although some of the characters from the previous civilization didn't quite match my impressions, but overall it was acceptable.

I started reading it shortly after it was released. It's one of the Honkai Impact 3rd fanfictions I've been following for a long time. It seems to have an outline, foreshadowing, and a plot. The back-and-forth between the two timelines is fine, and the relationship between the characters' status and experiences is very interesting. However, I feel that the protagonist's abilities are a bit one-dimensional, and right now, his abilities are mainly reflected in his Herrscher of the Wind.