I Transmigrated to Another World with an Online Shopping Skill!

Although there are a lot of things stitched together, it can also be said to be based on classics. It's pretty good so far. If I can keep writing like this until the end, I will give it 5 stars. [Learned] No, the more I watch, the more boring and uninteresting it becomes. It's so far from what I expected [face covering]

The aggrieved protagonist who uses the krypton gold system to practice law is beaten violently. The demi-human slave bought for 100 gold coins goes crazy during the red moon and almost kills the protagonist alone. It's so cool.

Generally speaking, the setting is very attractive and the plot setting is also very good, especially in terms of the protagonist's IQ setting. The lack of identity setting is a normal minor shortcoming, but it can still be regarded as a top-quality novel. The setting and plot are very good, but the character setting of the protagonist is right. You don't have a good grasp of the plot's impact on the entire novel. Due to the special concept of the novel, this novel can only be rated as above average or close to the threshold of top grade, but it has already surpassed most novels on the market.

It's well written. It's better looking than the Japanese toilet paper from another world, but it tastes just like the domestic toilet paper from another world. Write more about weapons and various types of weapons, such as light weapons and military drone matrices, to attract some military fans. Of course, if the weapons are unrealistic, they will easily be abandoned by military fans. . . I still feel it's not exciting enough. If you want to achieve good results, readers must enjoy reading it. The excitement comes too slowly and many readers have left in front of me. Now that the progress has reached the later stage, nuclear weapons have been fired, and the protagonist has reached the full level of Semi-Saint. It must be fun at this time. For example, find an opportunity to let the whole continent know that the protagonist is a jobless hero summoned from another world, and the war will start quickly. The arms can be sold casually, and there is no need to hide them. Speaking of which, the presence of other heroes is too low. In fact, we can write the plots of other heroes earlier. For example, the heroes first use the name of the hero to make money, do evil things, and become hypocrites. Then they become hostile to each other, or they all want to rule the world and start a war. , The war is raging on the protagonist. The protagonist does not want to be a brave man, he just wants to manage his own small territory, so he is forced to be a brave man, defeat the devil and other brave men, marry the princess, sit in the harem, and finally become a god. Although the plot is cliché, as long as the writing is not cliché, the writing is enjoyable [Chigua]

When Shuangwen read that there was nothing wrong with it, and when I saw that 100,000 nuclear warheads were bought with one copper coin, I knew that this novel was okay. A score of 8 can be said to be relatively objective. The logic is average, and the harem opens a lot. Most of the plots in the later stages can be skipped directly. If you read quickly, you can solve it in two days.

It's really beautiful, and it's so interesting to read.

The novel is worth reading and highly recommended

Overall evaluation: The future is promising Advantages: The world view is good, there is a lot of room for development, and there are no major problems with the plot logic for the time being. Disadvantages: There are too many battles. It should be said that there are too many repetitive battles. There were frequent battles with demons in the past, but except for the first battle with the fog, the rest can be omitted. It may also be too dense and the visual experience is not good (the novelty will be gone as soon as it appears too many times and it will become boring). In addition, I like to intersperse daily life between battles. This should have a more story-like feel. Then there is the second point. Now the plot feels like it is pushing the protagonist (or a sign). I hope that the protagonist drives the plot rather than the plot pushing the protagonist. Don't make the protagonist feel like he is being forced to run around. I hope that the protagonist has his own path and adventure instead of being pushed everywhere. The third point is, doesn't the protagonist want to make money? If he uses his online shopping skills to resell, he will open a store, become a chamber of commerce, and consider farming. I am very curious about how the author plans to deal with it. The better one I saw is that he let the protagonist open a tavern, sell distilled liquor, and sell it to the nobles as luxury goods [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

This fantasy novel is wonderfully written.

The structure is clear, the plot is set very cleverly, especially the scene description is very detailed!