An Old Man Cultivates Immortality: My Grandson Was Dumped for Being Unfounded

The current phenomenon of working as a worker, eating the old, and lying down is transformed into a fantasy novel to describe it. After getting rid of the fantasy, it is just a living modern life. It is well written.

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The writing is quite good. It has changed my inherent impression of system writing. Full praise.

It's been a long time since I've seen a cultivation article that interests me. Both the theme and the content are very good. Good reviews.

To be honest, this book is quite well written, and the subject matter is relatively new. I don't know why the rating is so low. It's not easy to find a book that I can read now. Come on, and can the author give me some tips?

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The plot of the story is well set up and not clichéd. The progress of the protagonist is well controlled, and there is no rush to expand the power of the system. This book is the high-quality dry food in tomatoes.

The writing is good. I read it in one sitting and it is fascinating. But the beginning is not exciting enough. I should draw a clear line with Feiwu's son and daughter-in-law.

Ignoring the author's description of the realm: building a foundation with magical powers, golden elixirs, walking through time to find rhubarb [face covering] is generally good, the character design of the male protagonist who gradually becomes stronger in search of opportunities is reasonable, and the description of mood and behavior is more detailed, which is consistent with the state of a mature old man in his 70s who is about to die from the beginning.

It's a very good book. The results are not great, but I personally feel it is quite good. The subject matter is also novel.